Temple of War

Not bad, I just need to update it soon, it's not enough.

The more you look at it, the more rubbish you see, dirty eyes

Overall, it's well written, but updates are too slow.

The writing style is goodヽ(⌐■㉨■)ノ♪♬

I strongly do not recommend reading this book. It goes on for hundreds of chapters where the heroine's family and the hero are insulted, humiliated, and abused. There is no slap in the face. The villain is defeated, and the hero refuses to admit it. He just wants to hide it, so that he can continue to be bullied. He keeps his identity hidden. What are you saying that your wife and daughter are in danger? If you don't tell them, the enemy won't be able to find out? Everyone around him knew it, and he himself couldn't hide it. His enemies were all fools. What should he be afraid of? Why should he be afraid of being chased by his enemies? If the majestic God of War and the President of the Guild were to be killed if he knew his birth status, then this God of War was really a coward.

It talks about the protagonist being powerful at the beginning, and until the end, the protagonist and his family are victims, and they have always been victims. However, no matter how powerful others are, how they hurt the protagonist's family, there is no priority. The protagonist is powerful, but it hurts the most. It is written that the protagonist is no longer the protagonist, but the bad guy becomes the protagonist. If you write about a strong protagonist, don't write about the protagonist being hurt and killed so much. Identify the villain's plot in advance and how to win. It's not always about the protagonist being hurt.

Too wordy. Hundreds of chapters for revenge. If you can't write, don't write. Waste of time

Slap in the face. A lot of waste. Brainless person

Two words garbage

Garbage article. It makes the God of War look like he is mentally retarded. It is not recommended to read.