Above the God of War

Don't procrastinate, don't be sloppy, be happy with your grudges, be good👍

The enemies of my family, including the Gongsun family, have not been destroyed. This is the end, garbage.

Very poorly written

Wimpy book, bad review

The last few chapters jumped too much, so I avenged my sister, and my revenge for genocide disappeared.

The small part at the beginning was not too strong, but it got worse towards the end. 1. The plot is confusing. What was left unfinished in the previous chapter and the previous paragraph suddenly disappeared, and the next paragraph suddenly moved to other places. 2. The whole process of disgusting people and things lasts for seven or eight chapters, but the ending ends in one sentence, and sometimes no explanation is given at all. 3. From the beginning to the end, the pig's trotter only avenges his daughter and sister, but the revenge of genocide was never considered and was not mentioned until the end. 4. There are many typos in the whole article, and even the name of the pig's trotter is often wrong, which always gives people the feeling that it was copied from other places. I wonder if this kind of novel needs to be reviewed before being published? !

The plot behind it is confusing, simple and crude.

What have you said? I just want to have fun. Do you know what logic is and what writing is? Can you come up with some ideas? Oh, it's no brainer. I write a lot. In the end, I still call it those two words. It's empty.

The first few chapters are okay, but the last few chapters are so confusing that I don't know what to read.

Didn't go to the capital to kill people