My Master Had No One by His Side, Yet Every Disciple Was a Big Shot

My mother-in-law came with a new book. It's a very nice article~ Yun Jianyue transformed into a vicious master who died tragically, and started in hell mode? This book about cultivating immortals does not take the ordinary path. Yun Jianyue holds the "tragic past life script" to rewrite the ending of this life. In her previous life, she was a gold medal kindergarten teacher. She once led a mixed-age class for 3-12 years old. "Coaxing children, breaking up conflicts, and focusing on key points" are what she is best at. Isn't this an advantage? When she first came here, the five apprentices were very cruel to her. It's true that her predecessor's brain was not very good and she tortured a few treasures so badly. It's okay that we took them down step by step every month. As the saying goes, if you want to take down a person, you must first take down his stomach. "You mistook the mythical beast for a pheasant, caught it, killed it, roasted it, and ate it until you were full." I didn't expect my mother-in-law's title to be so interesting. The apprentice who made the deepest impression was of course Su Miaomiao. He was easier to win over as a young apprentice. He was innocent and well-behaved. He had the gift of speech. His words contained power and could help his senior brothers and sisters. It's a koi possessed. Next is Yu Xian, the one who feels the most distressed. "She was originally the real daughter of Yaoxian Valley, but she was replaced by a fake daughter. Before she was four years old, she lived in a rural family that favored boys over girls. She had neither enough food nor clothing, and had to go up the mountain to cut grass and chop wild vegetables to feed the pigs every day. She cooks chickens, cooks meals for the whole family, and washes the dirty clothes for the whole family. But even though she is so sensible, she still has to be beaten and scolded by her adoptive mother and bullied by her younger brothers. She thought that she would not be beaten anymore, that her parents would love her, that she would be fed and clothed, and that she would no longer have to live in a woodshed. As a result, there was a much-loved fake daughter in the family. She still didn't love her mother, didn't have enough food and clothing, and lived in a dark and damp woodshed." This is what my mother-in-law wrote. The little Yu Xian was traumatized in her heart and longed for family affection, so she was careful. When she saw Master going to accompany her little junior sister, she also longed for Master's attention in her heart. It's okay. Yueyue will definitely feel it later, and I won't ignore your feelings. The eldest disciple has the talent for cultivation, the second disciple has the talent for weapon training, the third disciple can practice elixirs, and the fourth disciple has a natural sword bone... Those who like this type of treasures, come in quickly🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

My mother-in-law's new book is great!

The concepts and themes are pretty good. Except for the villains, no one in the show has a mouth to talk about the Virgin. It is obvious that the background can be photographed and the whole world of immortals can surf the Internet together. No matter what happens, they will not record or defend themselves. It looks like they are in trouble. People who are always against each other are able to clear their names and replace the original owner. The original owner also forgives and is a friend. It seems to make you angry. It is such a good subject.

The plot is very exciting, and the heroine is also a kindergarten teacher and understands the psychology of children. She knows how to take her time, unlike the heroines in other books who only care about comfort and don't know how to advance or retreat. It looks very good so far, I hope it will be updated more often.

Very good article! The heroine is gentle, domineering, and tough-minded. She tolerates the young seedlings like water and thrives. I prefer to watch the heroine in danger. The writing is very clever! Some parts are really well written, especially the psychological descriptions of these little Doudings (՞ਊ՞)👍. I really like this article. Some points are really poignant, and I almost cried! I can't hold it in! The bad thing is that it is not the end of the story, so please work hard and update it quickly ｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡. I hope there will be a male protagonist. The male protagonist is Yu Qingyan, Yu Meiren. I hope they can be together in the future. It's so good, I've already hit it! It's more healing and warm! It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of fantasy feeling. It's not just for fun, but there's a process! Many classic fantasy films are quite sad! The heroine is very strong, but she grows up step by step, feeling painful and strong at the same time! This kind of warmth is accompanied by comedy. It makes people feel comfortable and wonderful. Come on, the author is great ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It's very beautiful, the writing is exquisite and the details are in place. The plot of each chapter is exciting and not boring. The heroine is not a weak woman hiding behind men, she is a beautiful sister with strength and brains. Each battle is well described and immersive. The apprentices are all very heart-warming. Although they hated the heroine before, they only hated the brainless original. The eldest disciple Xiao Xingchen is so handsome! He has perseverance and perseverance, and is indifferent to outsiders, but in front of Yun Jianyue, he is still a child. The second disciple, Lu Wensheng, had a talent for refining weapons. He could ridicule or disdain others, but he was just like a child to his master and others. The third disciple, Yu Xian, had a miserable life experience, but finally put aside the so-called family ties and was influenced by his master. He became very powerful and was known as "Sister Immortal" The fourth disciple, Jiang Miwu, was born with a sword bone and could control the divine sword. The fifth disciple, Su Miaomiao, follows the instructions, the little koi of the senior brother and sister I hope you will work harder and update it, and I also hope you will write a male protagonist. Poppy poppies are really good. Wow.

There are only a few words used to describe a person, and I'm tired of reading them. Although the plot is novel, it's useless if the writing is not good.

I have read Chapter 160, so I am somewhat qualified to comment. First of all, when I first started reading it, I felt that the writing was very smooth, the descriptions were very detailed, and the plot was very novel. However, as the chapters increased, I found that her routines were surprisingly consistent. The protagonist (group) encountered danger, and then burst out with amazing combat power, or risked death and survived, or the master fell from the sky. The logic in many places does not make sense. There is too much emphasis on the growth of the protagonist, and the bosses who transform into gods and become virtual are treated like dogs. The protagonist's spirit transformation is more powerful than refining the void, while other refining the void is worse than building the foundation. It's up to you to decide whether it's reasonable or not. And the original male protagonist, after all, is a young sect master and a genius swordsman. He can be despicable and shameless, but he can't be like a local gangster who always swears in the street, can he? There are also many descriptions of native families. I really don't know what hatred or grudges are. Every time I see my biological daughter, I have to humiliate her and promote my adopted daughter. He is the owner of the Yaoxian Valley, and he can be considered a big boss after all. How can he talk like an ignorant child. His wife is just like a background background, knowing nothing but scolding her daughter. The whole book is full of scenes where the villain screams for his incompetence and then gets slapped in the face by the protagonist and killed instantly. Outsiders look down on him and slanders him, and then the protagonist counterattacks and slaps him in the face. Anyway, he just cares about having fun and not thinking about anything else. There are also the legitimate daughters of the four major families in the upper domain. They are just like a shrew. The four major families are at least well-established families. A real noblewoman may be able to kill people with a borrowed knife and be scheming, but she really doesn't make such weird remarks, okay? The author is really incompetent. And in order to emphasize the master's teachings, it is enough for children to just listen to the long words of chicken soup. The talented ninth-level formation mage of the Yu family, a powerful boss, is actually convinced by these simple principles? ? ? No, author, have you never studied? Do you know that older people have eaten more salt than you have eaten rice? Does your life experience need to be enlightened by your simple explanation? Are you okay? After reading Chapter 160, I was really tired of watching it. I encouraged myself again and again, maybe it will be better later on. It may have been a slap in the face at the beginning, but I found that it was one step after another, changing the scene and the object, without changing the lines. I advise everyone who wants to watch it to lose their minds and watch it. For someone like me who thinks clearly, it is really uncomfortable to watch it.

I finally know how painful it was when my teacher said that my composition was flashy.

Maybe it's because I've read too many cool articles. To be honest, this article would have been really tiring to read if it wasn't for the lack of cp. One thing can be solved but you have to torture it all over first, and then save this one and that one. The heroine is also very strange. She is indeed very good to the children, but she doesn't teach them to practice. Instead, she gives them more verbal rewards or some material rewards. Li, if this is the real world of cultivating immortals, these brats would be dead long ago. It's no use just sublimating their thoughts. Moreover, they can't kill their enemies without holding them to death. They scold the heroine and her gang lightly. They dig up pills and beat them. Just like when the heroine's third apprentice Yu Xian was kidnapped by the people of Yaoxian Valley, he was tortured first, and then the big green snake came out to save people and was tortured again.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, I was pinched to death by the original male protagonist. Every time I hit someone, I didn't pinch them to death. I had to give them a breath to jump around. Anyway, I don't recommend it to those who are used to reading cool stories. It's very frustrating and the logic is weird. However, the author's writing style is actually very good. The writing style is very contradictory to the plot. It gave me the feeling that the heroine suddenly loses her temper every time she wants to be strong.,,,,