Marrying a General to Build a Fortune

The article is very good, and the male and female protagonists are well described. There is a section where the female protagonist is sad because the male protagonist has lost his billions and has forgotten about it. The ending is very good, and the male and female protagonists are happy together.

There are too many typos and I'm tired of reading!

There are so many typos that the heroine is written as a bad person.

I like it, the plot is good and the sentences are fluent

There is something wrong with the author's outlook. Ye Wulang colluded with the mob to rob, and Ye Erlang abducted a young girl. No matter what the reason was, he was selfish and greedy in nature. Such crimes were resolved with money and power. Although it was ancient times, such a situation could be written as bullying, but it would not be appropriate to write a positive return of favor. I originally rated the plot and writing techniques as average, but after repeated criticisms, I changed the rating to "not good".

There isn't much of a storyline. The heroine's family is too virginal, and the hero is also procrastinating, and later on he is obsessed with love. In fact, the relationship comes out of nowhere, and there is no sweet feeling between the two of them. The bad guys inside can bounce around from beginning to end.

The whole story is well written, but there are too many typos

Well written

That prince didn't give up quickly because of the negative reviews given by this character.

The story is good, but the only flaw is that there are too many typos