The Immortal Is a Beauty

To be continued! Is this a loss of inspiration? After reading it, I thought it was a story about the rebirth of a nerdy fairy. God rewards hard work. I guess I couldn't stand the heroine being so nerdy, so I sent her to be reincarnated. 😁 The memory of the second generation also gave the heroine a little more knowledge about animals and plants. There is no barrier to cultivation. With appropriate skills, I didn't see any difference in how I behaved. It was just mediocre. Maybe she had the same personality in her previous life.

It started well, but then got worse and worse, ending in an anticlimax.

In terms of content, this novel about cultivating immortals is more like a house fight compared to novels with the same theme. The whole text tells the story of the various weird and shameless behaviors of the heroine's father's family, the male protagonist's father's family, the male protagonist's mother's father's family. In addition, there are all kinds of eating throughout the whole text, as if cultivating immortality is just incidental, and the heroine's journey to immortality is so smooth. Every time, she is full of luck, and it takes no effort to pick up all kinds of things. It is perfectly fine for the male and female protagonists not to write about their relationship. Not writing, the writing is too greasy, and it will deduct points instead of adding points. The author's writing style can be evaluated as very immature, and the overall concept has no depth. The language is often verbose, and omissions and typos are common. In addition, the heroine has the memory of earth life experience, and others do not. It is very inconsistent to pop up modern vocabulary at every turn. Generally speaking, it is not recommended for those who have read a lot of immortality themes.

I feel that the ending is too fast. There should be a chapter on the fairy world and the world of gods. It's uncomfortable. It suddenly disappeared halfway through.

He mentioned the past life and the previous life countless times, and mentioned the immortal mansion countless times, almost all of them were talking and rarely saw fighting.

The background of this article is quite good. It's just that the characters are not good, quite speechless, and there are too many typos, just like being illiterate, speechless😒. I don't recommend watching it, the plot is a bit boring. The heroine is a bit pretentious. One sentence can be repeated several times, but overall it is not recommended to read it. Abandoned

The whole article is full of nonsense, there are so many excellent ones, it makes me angry.

The dialogue is so mechanical that it feels like "Have you eaten?" "Eat" "What about you" "I ate it too" And there's always a narration, making it easy for the reader to be entertained. When it comes to family ties, bad ones cannot be broken. My brother is not close to me.

It made the audience think they were fools, and it was so irritating.

Well enough