Fantasy Starts from the Egg and Is Invincible

Alas, I can't change the rating, so it's only average if I really want to give it. I have read more than two hundred chapters now, and there are too many typos. What I wrote when I was a bird is basically no different from a human monk.

Too many typos

Really, the writing is very brainless. The evolution value is useless at all, and upgrading is extremely slow. At the very least, your system doesn't even have any skills. I laughed. The poison test is over. I hope all readers will not make the mistake.

Another first for an author

It looks good, but there are too many typos, and some of the content has been written incorrectly. It is obvious that a lot of evolution values ​​have been used, and there are still more than 400,000. It is in chapter 452. You can take a look. I hope there won't be so many typos and if I'm more careful, it will look better.

The material selection is good, the plot is average, many parts are written unreasonably, and the typos are really unbearable. You can find twenty typos in one chapter, but they are not twenty. I have read more than two hundred chapters, and there are too many typos. I can't watch anymore.

Too many typos

There are too many typos and it is not fluent at all.

Too many typos

Originally, the selection of materials was pretty good and interesting. The previous chapter always foreshadows the fact that one's own concept of the human soul will not have any taboo thoughts on other species, and how one should value one's subordinates. But not long after I met a female bird, I wrote about how I admired the female bird and fell in love at first sight, and then became so angry that the female bird casually buried her brother tens of thousands. Forget it if there are too many typos. I can understand your need to open a harem, but don't let inconsistencies affect the perception.