Douluo Dalu: You Eloped with Yu Xiaogang? Don't Come Begging When You Regret It

A subversive rewrite in Douluo fan fiction. Qian Xunji is no longer a Douluo of the Secret Chamber, who has made Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang happy. Can Yu Xiaogang still love Bibi Dong like in the original novel when he faces Bibi Dong whose cultivation has been ruined and his knowledge has been sealed? Bibi Dong was reduced to a reproductive tool, turned black and inherited the Rakshasa God, and led the evil soul master to cause turmoil on the mainland just to get Qian Xunji's forgiveness? The plot has been greatly rewritten, time travel Tang San VS reborn god king Tang San. Qianxunji – Bibi Dong? The love brain gets out of the Wuhun Palace. Ah Yin? Take it! Snow Emperor, Ice Emperor? Take it! Jade's anus is fucked by a man and a man? All the people directly related to Yu Xiaoan in the Blue Lightning Sect, regardless of gender, are reduced to puffs? The Wuhun Palace is about to unify the continent. The Shura God and the Poseidon are surrounding the Angel God. Qian Xunji "Bully my ancestor, kill him!" Kill the Poseidon with one shot. Absorb the Golden Dragon King and destroy the four great God Kings to unify the God Realm?

The plot is really too slow, the battles are written in a mess, and there is no expressiveness at all. The upgrade process of the protagonist is as bland as water. I am as pale as a chrysanthemum when watching it, but these are still tolerable. The most intolerable thing is that after taking Ah Yin, he was completely ruined from here on. The random opening of the harem not only gave him a reputation of being sentimental, but also was not conducive to the promotion of the plot. Killing Ah Yin directly was not the end of the world. Didn't the system require that Hu Tang San be cut off? If you tell people where they were born, doesn't that count as cutting off their hair? I have to make a bunch of stuff in a row, which is so vain that people have no desire to read it.

Originally, you could have given me full marks if you didn't write a side story, but your writing of this side page was such a failure. It drags on and on and has no exciting plot. What's the point of traveling through time and space, rebirth after rebirth? Cliché and nothing new. I couldn't continue writing about the arrangements after the war, so I just left it unfinished and wrote about the two Bibi Dong competing for Qian Xunji. It's not as good as the extra story after the war. Extremely boring.

It was okay at the beginning, but the plot was too ordinary and there wasn't much description of the protagonist at all. Let's just say it was cool. Most of the chapters didn't mention the protagonist himself. Let's just say it was annoying. The protagonist's strength was always online. The most important thing is that the plot got messy at the end! I don't even know the levels of my own martial arts souls. I am walking around at level 99, and my titles are not as good as those of dogs. The plot that follows is difficult to explain in one sentence, and I can't watch it even if I don't use my brain.

Where is the picture?

It looks good, but it always uses some so-called concept pictures to deceive readers😾

Bibi Dong regrets the flow, it's just so-so, it's quite embarrassing to watch the various Dragon King scenes, there's not the slightest bit of realism.

This author... Is totally awesome... I thought the author could only be abstract at most, but I didn't expect that there would be masters next 🤣

I specially logged in to give a good review. The Little Tank of Abuse is very comfortable to watch, Big Head Candy Three is also hard to break, and there are also the Secret Room and Brother Scar that accompany the whole story. In the fanfic, the story plot is somewhat subversive, and the author incorporates many novel ideas, such as the two Tang Sans being enemies of each other.

It's just too watery and there are too many repetitive things.