Immortality Begins with the Master of Alchemy

The impression before Chapter 150 was pretty good, or more in line with my taste. After Chapter 150, the plot style began to become unstable starting from the Battle of Jindan, and there was an obvious sense of division between the plots. What was supposed to be an early foreshadowing turned directly into a water character, leaving many places baffled. At present, I see that I have just changed to the Fairy City map. Let's see how it goes here. If there is improvement, I will comment again.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel that the writing is a bit long-winded and cumbersome, with too many explanations, which makes the protagonist's character a bit unlikable. He is a petty quarrel, a white-eyed wolf who only likes to take advantage of others, and does not do anything. Fortunately, the people around him are kind to him. The protagonist takes and supports him, but he never really thinks about giving back or supporting the people around him, which affects the reading experience...

Treasure books I don't want others to discover

It took me 200 to build the foundation. I saw 400 and I haven't reached the late stage of foundation building yet. If I don't write 1000 chapters, I won't be able to reach Nascent Soul. I can't stand it anymore. It's not that exciting.

The protagonist builds his foundation and forms pills in seconds, shows off all kinds of tricks, and then gets whatever resources he can, and if they leak out, he can do whatever he wants, and return a man and two women. All kinds of jealousy are suitable for palace fighting dramas.

In the early stage, the protagonist said that only strength is the first. He has five spiritual roots and no special talent. Plug-ins cannot directly improve his cultivation. Therefore, he is devoted to Taoism and does not consider Taoist companions. Even if he considers it, he must find someone with good talent or a special physique that can help him improve his cultivation. As a result, he has rubbish talent and finds two rubbish women. Not only does it not help him improve his cultivation, but it also drags down his cultivation, which is inconsistent. If you don't practice well and think about the sect every day, a woman won't know how to practice to a high level in the future.

This author is very watery, the sea is full of water!

I think the author should write a palace fighting drama. Although it is a fairy tale, it is almost full of intrigues. It has only been building the foundation after hundreds of chapters. Moreover, the protagonist clearly knows that his own strength is the foundation, but he just can't let go of the Luo Tianhui he founded and develops the sect every day. Can you imagine that after hundreds of chapters, there is a secret place that has not been explored, and the opportunity does not exist. Everyday intrigues and alchemy refining. In other novels, the protagonist would not have explored ten or eight secret caves in the early stage.

To sum up, it is too capable💦word count, too many psychological activities, and too many indifferent explanations. The protagonist is very unlikeable, ignorant of life and death, and greedy.

In Chapter 315, it doesn't look good to accept Sima Hui.