The Doting Newlyweds and Their Kids

I personally think it is correct. I like this novel very much. Overall, I think the writing is good and needs to be improved. I also like the plot between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. But the only thing I have to question is that Xiaochu and Xiaoci are only five years old, so they know too much. Five-year-old children shouldn't stay in kindergarten. Besides, even if they stay in kindergarten, they won't learn so many things. Barely give me a good review!

This novel is really worth reading. Anyway, when I read this novel, in the first few dozen chapters, the heroine was really having a hard time. I read her personal experience, and then I really wanted to cry. It is really not easy for a five-year-old child to dare to use swords to protect his mother and younger brother. Other children at this age are happy, but the mistakes of others make the heroine A person has to bear a lot of pain. I feel really sorry for the heroine when I read this novel. The author describes every expression and movement of the heroine in this novel very delicately, which makes people think of the scenes in the novel. The author is really good. This is also the highest-quality movie I have ever seen with a male protagonist. I like it very much. I just wish there were more scenes with the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Everything else is impeccable.

The plot is wonderful and makes people unable to put it down. Especially the sentences describing Gu Shimu and his two sons Xiaochu and Xiaoci are so brilliant that they make people intoxicated by the cuteness of the two children.

I found that the author really likes to write plots about having the wrong child. Can we jump out of the trap and write about emotional lines? After all, this is a romance novel! 😂😂😂 Thank you Liao!

It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing. There is no detailed description, but it can make people imagine the scene of the story👏👏👏 Another thing is that the progress is too fast. You shouldn't be very resistant when you first meet a stranger. How come there is no barrier between the heroine and the hero, and they start fighting like old friends? Is it because there is a halo of male and female protagonists? 🌝🌝🌝🌝

The author should update it soon. There is a book shortage, so I am waiting for you every day.

The language is straightforward and trivial, and the same thing or idea is repeated several times. It's like a shrew who is cursing but has no words and can only grasp the meaning of a sentence. The stories of several families are also similar. It feels like a replay. After reading many chapters, it failed to advance the plot, and it was difficult for the author to type out the words. Good reviews are far-fetched, bad reviews are intolerable, and neutral reviews are just right. Needs to be improved

To be honest, the heroine was too quick to admit her marriage, without any hesitation, and immediately asked her parents. If I had been abused and loved for so many years, I would definitely have a gap in my heart.

The protagonist is surrounded by delinquent children! Either they are illegitimate, the articles are repetitive, they repeatedly say these unnutritious things, there are no ups and downs, and there is no progress! The context of the article is Tang Gu's emotional development, but it does not describe the progress of the protagonist's situation. They are all people around him. It is fate that everyone around him has a story.

That's it. Isn't it annoying that the entire plot is about recognizing relatives?