Leaving the Affairs of the Mortal World Behind

The plot is quite novel. The male protagonist is calm, smart, affectionate and dedicated, kind and upright. He has been reincarnated countless times and finally waited for his redemption. The heroine who traveled through time did not have a golden finger, she was just a smart little girl, but she also had her own persistence. Their meeting was so cute, their way of getting along was not pretentious, and it was soothing to watch. The heroine's father and King of Light are so loving, and they must be the best CPs. Is it a little too bumpy in the back? It felt like the two of them had experienced all the suffering in the world, and it was unbelievable that a female prostitute of the Su family had done so many things repeatedly. The deconstruction is a bit trivial. Wouldn't it be better if it were simpler? I'm a little tired after reading it.

The writing is quite good, but I felt that there were too many stories in the middle and it was too long. I just wanted to finish it sweetly.

I asked Best to take a leave of absence because my writing style is good and I have at least some writing skills. However, I really disagree with the characterization of the characters, especially the heroine. Before the time travel, I didn't say how old the heroine was, but the written expression seems to be at least in her twenties. Plus the years of time travel, she is at least a thirty-year-old aunt. But she cries when a wasp stings her, cries when she touches the palm of her hand, and still cries when she can't find her original father. . . Modern ten-year-old children are better than her. Regardless of their IQ, I couldn't stand the pretentiousness and pretending to be innocent. Although the writing was good, I still gave up. The author is not suitable for writing time travel stories, so he should just focus on classical Chinese writing.

It's so beautiful that my stomach hurts from laughing so hard. It's a pity that the author has only written two novels. I hope you can write more.

I like this kind of humorous articles. Although Qiao Bao loves to cry and is silly, he is also a smart little guy with lots of ideas and is also funny! Brother Ergou is a cool and handsome guy with deep thoughts, and the story of how the two met and fell in love is also very sweet! It's just that Qiao Bao and Brother Ergou are really like Sun Wukong who learned the scriptures and went through ninety-nine and eighty-one tribulations before achieving happiness and consummation 😂 Fortunately, the ending of the ancient version did not clearly indicate that Qiao Bao had to leave first, otherwise I would have fainted from crying! This is too miserable! The pairing of Qiao Changtian and King Guang is also wonderful! The characters like Senior Sister Zhang and Divine Doctor Shi are also super funny! Finally, I want to complain about Brother Ergou, why he didn't immediately find a killer to kill the girl named Su after he was reborn! This won't be the end of the story! Or Brother Ergou must go through so many lives of torture before he can meet the heroine...

I picked it up from the bookshelf. I had read more than 60 chapters and had no impression of it. I read the comments and it was good. I read through it a little more. I just have a short story and I didn't find it humorous. It's the same problem as many novels. The writing style is better than many time-traveling novels. The writing style of most time-traveling novels is incomprehensible.

The plot is not abrupt, the characters are not collapsed, the writing is not verbose, and overall it is pretty good.

I feel that the emperor and the princess's father are very clichés, hahahaha. I feel that without the emperor and the princess's father, life has no color. This article is good, Why is the emperor always clinging to the princess' father and not having a baby? Who will the throne be passed to in the future?

It's very beautiful, there are no gorgeous words, but each character is vividly portrayed. It's a rare piece of good writing.

At first I thought it was okay, but after reading it I realized that all good things need time to settle in and be savored carefully.