My Mother-In-Law Is a Bit Fierce

The plot in the middle is really confusing and the timeline is not clear. The heroine is originally a Taekwondo master, but she can't lift a bucket of water later. It's really contradictory.

Great, great, great

In many places before, it was said that the results will be discussed later and concluded directly. . . . Didn't she say earlier that her family supported taking in the little squirrel and build a place for them to live? Later, they said that the little squirrel would provide some benefits to her family. Also, when Yao Da was killed by his son, there was no immediate conclusion. ? ? The author is great

Wonderful plot and wonderful writing

Nice! Nice! It just looks good!

Not interesting

They also dispatched the national master or some other second-in-command, thinking they would save the world... But nothing happened.

Moji, the plot is bland, the structure is loose, and some of it is not mentioned at all, and it feels like the word count is the same. If some nonsense parts were deleted, the structure would be compact, and the article would be less dull. Without saying too much, at least more than a hundred chapters would have to be cut off. Then I dug a hole in the front and ended up hastily in the back. I wrote about finding a way to return to the modern world, but I didn't say whether the old man who imitated Rong found it in the back. I didn't explain clearly where the little squirrel that everyone is interested in came from and why it is so magical. In summary, this should be a novel written by a novice.

They are quite beautiful, and they all lead people to do good. Full of positive energy. Recommend!

Good reviews