Natural Disaster: After Hoarding Billions of Supplies, I Won

If we weave thirty centimeters in one hour, we count it as twenty minutes if we start weaving at six o'clock and have dinner. If we finish weaving a piece of cloth before twelve o'clock, we count it as weaving until twelve o'clock, a total of 5-6 hours. If we consider six hours, it is only 180 centimeters. Where is the piece of cloth? I can only make underwear, but also autumn clothes? A piece of cloth is 13.2 Meters or 33.33 Meters. And also write down the steps without spinning. It is said that novels cannot be too rigorous, or the world is different from ours. Then let me change it. The goose feather cloth has no feeling in the hand, but it feels warm immediately after putting it on. Will the clothes be accurately positioned? There is also a scene where I went out with my pets immediately after it snowed. Not only did it not sink, but a group of larger animals seemed to be fighting on the ground. It has never snowed where the author lives, so I can always see videos posted by people from the north. And the protagonist just said one second ago that space is the trump card to save life. No one can say it. The next second he told his friends and gave him the trump card. No wonder the last life was so miserable.

The heroine is very holy, she has been helping poor strangers! I bought it for 0 yuan and still picked and chose, saying that I would leave it to the people behind me! But the food was in the water and was about to go bad, and there were viruses after soaking in the water. Ordinary people around here didn't have transportation or diving suits, so they couldn't dive underwater. Most importantly, there was an earthquake, so all the food was wasted. If you really want to save some, you might as well collect it all and donate it to the soldiers for distribution!

Damn it, why don't you just send them away and leave them alive? I'm really speechless.

I saw 136 and I can't stand it anymore. The plot progress is a bit slow. The heroine does not fully trust the three people and has been unwilling to expose her space. However, this makes her very passive. She can obviously live a good life but she has to endure hardships together. It is not very understandable.

I was speechless about this. The previous one was quite good, but I wrote a lot of nonsense in order to highlight the decisiveness of the heroine, and she was not decisive enough. People came to the house to grab things, and I talked nonsense with them. Then, I helped my neighbor's house by looking after his house. When someone picks the lock, you don't come out until the lock is picked out, and you just watch him finish knocking the lock, and then talk a lot of nonsense, and then show that you are awesome, as if you have a God's perspective, you are like that big guy.

I didn't have the desire to keep reading. I just kept turning to the next page. I didn't buy anything for zero yuan. I always took others with me and couldn't get anything.

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos

Too much nonsense

The plot is very bland, just like a daily account, and the heroine is also average. She doesn't accept many supplies, but picks and chooses. She feels that she has no shortage. It is obviously more convenient to be alone and can live better, but she has to form a team. Her teammates are not very strong, but they limit the space they can use. Anyway, it is just one drag three. The killing is quite decisive, but there is always a lot of nonsense to say before each killing.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. If the full score is 10 points, I can give a passing score of 6.5 Points. It feels a bit anticlimactic. The development in the beginning is quite satisfactory, but the writing becomes more and more chaotic later. Even from the perspective of wits, it feels a bit like a child playing house. Obviously nothing is said but you guess everything. The pace in the latter part is obviously faster. Many things that should be written are not written. It may be that the author wants to finish it early and does not want to write it. For example, at the end, three ships came to exchange supplies. When I asked them how they discovered it, they said someone asked about the smell of meat. Did I see this directly? ? ? Not to mention anything else, the countryside is full of large pots and stoves, and cooking in the open air may not necessarily travel that far. Even if you say you are a person with enhanced sense of smell, then you have to travel from the sea to be farther than the horizon that ordinary people can see. There are many similar places that have a clear sense of intelligence. Moreover, the place where Qianqian became a mermaid has not been mentioned since the boat landed. At first, I thought it would become some kind of combat power or special characteristics, but it turned out that there was nothing. So at that time, I spent a lot of time writing three articles just for the sake of coding. There were also many typos. I first saw it in a short video. The author of that short video was also very smart and skipped the part about stocking up. It looked much more comfortable without a lot of running accounts. Later, I went to the base for the first time and started reading novels. Although there are many problems mentioned above, I think if this is an article written by a novice author, 6.5 Points is a relatively reasonable score. At the beginning, the heroine was not indecisive at all, she killed when she needed to, and her IQ was online. However, the gap was a bit big later, and then there was a lot of foreshadowing about the identity of the old Taoist priest. In fact, this book still has a lot of room for improvement, which is a pity.