The Green Pitch's Savage Striker

I look tired. I have to say one thing over and over again! The game was almost passed by in a flash.

The author's writing is good and his writing style is free and funny. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel this book is worth reading.

I love watching it!

A female reporter seduced half of the book but didn't finish it. She kept writing and felt helpless. Disgusting? Pig's trotter's explosive personality is contradictory to the depiction of revenge and calculation! If Heidi deliberately seduces but refuses to eat because of the news, can the pig's feet be tolerated? If he really has feelings for ambiguity, can Pig's Feet tolerate it? Therefore, the female reporter and the protagonist have contradictory personalities, which is a failure.

Chapter 263: Abandoned book. So the evaluation is only based on the content I have read. The follow-up may be good or bad, but I can only stick to this point. Green Storm has more than two hundred chapters, but the author did not grasp these four words very well. As I kept reading, I suspected that Lin Yifeng was not the protagonist, or even the absolute protagonist. The other people's roles were no less important than Lin Yifeng's. Some commentators think that for example, there are low numbers on transfers. Actually, I think not. Those contents can be regarded as reflecting Lin Yifeng's "crazy". He is crazy about playing football, crazy about doing things, and even crazy about transfers. Why does it feel like a low number? It's because the description of Lin Yifeng and his training, games, etc. Is too little, too short and too perfunctory. There are so many games in a season, whether it is just starting out or fighting for relegation, the writing is too simple, not to mention how detailed each game must be written. , But you always have to choose some key games to fully reflect Lin Yifeng's "crazyness". But just as I am writing a review to recall Lin Yifeng's games now, all that is left is that he rushed forward like a power train, and then passed by one, two, three, four, then scored, and then disappeared... So embarrassing. The angle of the article feels more like an entertainment reporter writing about Lin Yifeng's daily life. The proportion of the protagonist's role and the side plots other than the main plot is seriously out of balance. Sometimes the writing suddenly extends to other things, which really makes people feel that the author is incompetent. In fact, it might be better if the green storm front is changed to green things. I hope the author can work harder next time!

Just average. It looks tiring. At first I just thought there were some repetitive descriptions of things, but later I found out that they were all

It's not good-looking, it's too good at writing, and I wrote fifty chapters about the transfer. It's cadenced, over-pressed, and there's no reason.

Too much nonsense and too little plot. It's boring. It's as if you're always talking to yourself.

Sincerely! Various water word counts! It can be said in one sentence. It just so happens that you can write a chapter here!

There is no sense of rhythm, and it is unable to highlight the main points of the protagonist and record the plot. Book rating 2.5