Quickly Travel Through This Time, the White Lotus Is Not Good

First of all, it is a pity that such a beautiful book does not have a long review, although I don't know why the rating is so low. The heroine is beautiful and strong but not miserable. The plot is mainly about torturing the scum and making love with Bai Lian, supplemented by love. The plot is not procrastinating. There are no superficial plots in the total of 500 chapters. At first, I was persuaded to quit by the name of the heroine Hua Xiyan. I felt that she should be a Mary Suwen. But then I ran out of books and opened it. Word, my goodness, the heroine is smart, brave, resourceful, and can do things neatly, and she won't be trapped by the hero's love when doing tasks in the later stages. It feels like it is not the same routine as other fast wear games, there are Su Youshuang, some abuse, and some cookies. It is different from the sweet text quick travel and the death shield quick travel. The end of each plane ends abruptly, the kind that is still unfinished... Woo woo woo, I finally beg you to write a quick version and add a side story in the future. Wow woo woo, I can't get enough. It's so miserable.

Usually everyone will burst into tears when they see the second story. But when you read all the stories, you will realize that tolerance is too much! What I can't help feeling is Rong Yue (Rong Xuan's brother) in the second world, the one who hugged Hua Xiyan and cried bitterly in the rain. It's not the Rong Yue where women are superior to men, it's not the Rong Yue in the apocalypse... It's not the Rong Yue who is a plane manager. So much so that I was even a little angry at the end. If possible, I hope to see Hua Xiyan reborn into a second story in my lifetime and repay the love of Rong Xuan's brother Rong Yue. The overall plot is neat and not sloppy. The tasks in each world are basically very interesting. I like Rong Yue's unconditional doting on Hua Xiyan, and I also like Hua Xiyan's rational and jumping thinking. The characters in each world are realistically portrayed. In the end, Rabbit is so good that his memory of Hua Xiyan is not clear because he has traveled through time. I cried quite a lot during that part (Hua Xiyan stabbed the Yue God again)

Well, this novel really exceeded my expectations! ! ! The plot is rich and delicate, and the heroine is sensible but very strategic. I was really disappointed when I saw the second story... Rong Yue made me feel very sorry for him, and I wished that the heroine could be with him. It's a pity that I don't, after all, I can't interfere with people's own choices. And the story is very immersive! I cried so much... The only shortcoming is that there is no transition time in each story, so it ends in a hurry. But it's really beautiful and highly recommended🉑️! ! ! ! ! Please don't stop reading because of bad reviews. Everyone has their own feelings. You have to experience this novel for yourself. I am deeply attracted by the author here, and the writing is really good👌👌👍I say 666 to this. By the way, if you pay attention to the emotional line, don't expect too much. This novel is mainly about the plot! ! ! Here again I say that the author is great! ! ! ! ! ! Okay, let's break up!

Some of the plots written by the author are relatively novel, and the literary talent is also good. However, the reason for the negative review is that it was actually good at the beginning, but later on the content seemed very sloppy, without beginning or end. I got into this book after reading the negative reviews. Many of the negative reviews said, "The plot is good, but I made a mistake." So I actually gave this book a relatively high rating in my heart, but when I actually looked at it, I didn't think it was very amazing. It just felt like a gap. Of course, this is not the author's fault, it is my definition of this work that is too high. But the main reason is because it has no beginning or end. You can write a short story, no problem, of course, provided that you explain the plot clearly. Just like the story about Hua Xiuzhu, the plot is good, but the heroine has nothing to do at all in the end. Finally, it ends with Hua Xiuzhu getting married, and the plot between the heroine and the hero is hasty. Another example is Li Shaocheng's article. Originally, each plane had tasks, but I didn't know the tasks of that plane. And it ends with the words of the male protagonist. It doesn't say what happened to the male and female protagonist in the end. It also doesn't say what happened to Li Shaocheng in the end. It feels too rushed. I am seriously making suggestions. If someone replies to me and says, "You are so awesome, you write it." "It is not easy for an author to write a novel, so what's wrong with giving a good review?" I don't accept this kind of moral kidnapping. It is indeed not easy for the author to write a novel, so I read the work very seriously and wrote a review. Isn't this a way of respecting the author? 2021.10.3 .

I burst into tears during the second short story. It's so good. I've only finished three stories now and I don't know if I can keep reading. But it doesn't stop me from liking this article. Forever yyds

The stories before Cultivation were good, but the Cultivation chapter was a bit boring at the beginning. I kept skipping chapters to read the story "You Are My World". I felt that my brother and best friend were so innocent, especially my brother. It was so miserable. It was good to be with him, but Rong Yue had nothing to watch. 😂

Hmm... How can I put it this way, the first part looks very exciting, but the later part feels very perfunctory. It's not that the author's writing is not good, but the later part is a bit perfunctory. And I prefer the ending that is more grand. The only one I like better is the chapter where the heroine and Rong Yue switch bodies. Then I would like to make a comment. I hope that the author will not end hastily when he ends. I prefer to watch a bit of sadism, not to say anything else. I personally prefer to watch a bit more sadistic. I am focusing on the ending. Then there are a few chapters that are too single and a bit boring. Overall, I think there are a lot of flaws. (I'm just expressing my own opinion. I don't mean to criticize her. I'm just curious and want to ask. I don't have any malice and I didn't say anything about her. If you think what I said is wrong, you don't have to take my comments seriously. If you think what I said is wrong, I can change it. I say important things three times. I have no malice. I just express my own opinion. It's just an opinion; I have no malice, I'm just expressing my own opinion; I have no malice, I'm just expressing my own opinion, don't troll me, my parents are alive and have brains, I'm not a troll, I'm just curious, I'm really just curious, I don't have any malice, let me say it for the last time, don't troll me, and one more thing, just give me a like) [Dog head saves his life!

Really speechless🙄 Are they all be? ! The second world made Rong burst into tears. Is this still a little sweet? Is this a misunderstanding about sweet pets? ! That's outrageous As a result, the fourth world appeared and was inexplicably The ending always sucks So there is no male protagonist? After seeing the four worlds, I feel bad. It's all be. If you want to see sweet pets, don't come here, you will be disappointed.

Except for the somewhat sloppy ending of each world, there is nothing else to say. I really like the heroine's character. She doesn't bring personal emotions to the task and is always very sensible. My personal favorite is the second world. I could shed several fish with tears when I watched it. I have a weak question: When will the author release a new book?

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