Border Troops in a Chaotic Era: I Started by Trading Military Merit for a Wife

I watched it in a hurry, and I could barely take a look. The shortcomings are that there are four differences. You would say it is a cool novel (supernatural powers, talents, etc.). The plot is procrastinating and involves some inconsistent plots. You would say it is a plot plot (an unknown person is a tool in the hands of those in power. The temptation to pull these and other temptations will kill you as a villain. Are there taboos about things? That's a feudal society, buddy?) He also made some childish tricks, saying that he didn't recognize his talent and slept randomly (it smells so good, I can believe it if he sleeps with a dog any day). Do you still have some common sense and know what it means to swing around with 500 pounds (250 kilograms) in one hand? Don't talk about ancient times. In ancient times, kilograms were heavier. Being able to spin around means that the arm strength is more than 500 kilograms. How much energy is calculated by punching out with all your strength? Were all people in ancient times made of steel? One moment he looks like a weak chicken, and the next moment he writes how awesome his skills are. And Zhenbei Gong, who writes so awesome on the front but fake on the back, can still use it. Isn't it buddy? Isn't it easy to find such a talented person? Do you know the concept of being able to kill a mature tiger with your fists?

The writing is solid, the plot is okay, and it's worth watching

The content is confusing, Luo Ji's thinking is too loose, and the protagonist is as stupid as a pig. I don't know how the editor can portray the protagonist into such a character!

The loopholes are too big, and the casting process on the grassland is not good to begin with. How can it be possible to use a sword, which is usually a scimitar. When the gunpowder exploded for the first time, the horses must have been frightened and ran away. Why were there still cavalry?

The first half is exciting, but the second half goes too fast, and the rhythm is not controlled well. It copies the settings of other system texts. It is a pity that the tiger starts and ends at the end. The story is very good, and there is still potential. I suggest that the author can rewrite the second half.

This book is a time-travel novel, right? How can I write something that is neither pointless nor tough? I am restrained and aggrieved at every turn. What kind of writing is this?

It looks very contradictory. I can't stand it. Everything is contradictory.

Why hasn't it been updated yet? It was only updated 30 hours ago yesterday and almost 24 hours have passed today.

Exaggerating and supporting helplessly at every step

The structure of the story is acceptable and quite attractive, but the writing style is jerky, and the preface often does not match the follower; the writing skills are weak, idioms are used indiscriminately, and there are many typos.