Second Master, Your Little Ancestor a Exploded

It's so beautiful, I was still a little bit reluctant to let go when I saw the finale.

It's very interesting to watch, but I hope that the heroine and the hero can achieve success. The hero loves the heroine so much and wants to be together. I hope it's a sweet drama. I love it. I recommend it.

Isn't the third daughter a sister? It's a bit confusing to call the heroine sister

It's so beautiful. I beg the author to update it quickly.

There are too many typos in the book I even spelled the protagonist's name wrong So speechless

The female protagonist is too pretentious and reserved🙃, and I feel that the male protagonist is so pitiful (´;;`) humble and full of stars😢I always like the female protagonist and feel sorry for the male protagonist

There are so many differences between before and after, even the character's personality changes later on.

This book has a lot of problems. First of all, it started with an infighting within the Gu family, between Gu Qian and Yun Su. It was obvious that Gu Qian had a background, but before the book was finished, he went to Yun Kechen again. There were many holes left unfilled, such as: Yun Su fell downstairs and did not withdraw from the investigation, Gu Muchen chased Gu Qian, and Gu Qian showed up at the Gu family again for no reason. But without being suspected, Zhao Yameng and others were expelled from the Yun Mansion and returned inexplicably... There are many pitfalls, many contents are confusing and cannot be connected at all. These are problems with the plot and content. Secondly, the names and characters are mixed up, and it is not an ordinary surname change. It is a direct lack of connection. The biggest problem is Gu Muchen's assistant, from Zhou Wen to Liu Wen to Fang Wen, and finally to Fang Bai. There is also Yun Su's uncle, whose surname was Yun at first and then He. The logic is completely wrong. Finally, I think the biggest problem is that the early development all revolves around one person, that is Mr. Gu. Everyone's behavior must consider the feelings of Mr. Gu, which seems very annoying. Also, I think: Gu Muchen said it is not rare. The Gu family, what about his capital, and then Gu Qian, who obviously has a bigger backing, there is no need to keep an eye on the Gu family, and then Yun Su is flooded with love and care every day because she has not been cared for since she was a child. The Speechless Virgin, Zhao Lanyue suddenly became smarter, Yun's father's wavering attitude, there are too many doubts, and the logic is wrong. The more he looks at it, the more confused he becomes. I haven't finished it yet, but I've reached Chapter 481. I persisted because I just wanted to see how the author wrote the ending. It was my first time writing this thing, and it was purely based on my inner feelings.

Well enough

Nice