Mrs. Zhan's Vest Cannot Be Hidden

Very beautiful, I like it very much, very sweet

It was a good read, but I didn't finish it yet. I'm looking forward to the author's next book.

Personally I don't like it very much, it's weird🤨I can't put it into words, it's a bit bloody

It's super sweet, and I'm so full after reading it😊, but I feel like the author can continue writing, otherwise it always feels a bit awkward, that is, the plot is not so perfect, and there are indeed typos, although not too many, I hope the author can improve it a lot, and look forward to a better you (๑˙ー˙๑) Hehehe, the ending is full~

There is no bloody plot, and the story is strong for both men and women. Looking forward to a new book from the author

Cp is sweet, supported by dog ​​food, has many vests, nice

Disadvantages: 1. Too many typos 2. The ending is too hasty 3. What use do the heroine's father and Liu Xinxin have to Bai Yue? Why did the family elders persuade the heroine to keep them? 4. Wolf's branch plot: The first part is well written, but the second part is too sloppy. I remember a scene where several families in Jincheng had a brand. When Yuejia was almost gone, the wolf wanted to take away the Yuejia brand. If I guess correctly, the author wants to lay out the overall situation, but why is the wolf, a hidden boss, so easy to be caught? And why is he so obsessed with the heroine? Just don't want the Yan family to have an easier time? 5. What is the name of Xiaoxing when the heroine sends a message? The final ending is not explained. 6. The side plot of the heroine's best friends is too small and not comprehensive. 7. The male protagonist's brother is probably just a tool that promotes the development of the plot and can also portray the characters of other supporting characters. Since this is the beginning, don't write about the heroine and his branch line. Although this branch line just started, it was immediately abandoned by the author. The author himself doesn't know whether he deliberately opened the game too high or had some other idea, but he failed to control the rhythm later on and only wrote the story of the emotional line between the male and female protagonists and the battle of wits and courage between the male and female protagonists and Liu Xinxin's family. A great conspiracy theory novel turned into a house fight? The layout is smaller

So why does the wolf want to punish Nian Nian? What is his relationship with Niannian?

It's very good. I've finished reading it. It's very short and the plot is not too lengthy. It's quite sweet.

The writing is good, come on, the author is great😁😁