The First Immortal of the Ancient World

I was persuaded to quit after reading the first chapter Pangu hasn't died yet, the sky hasn't opened yet, the Chaos Treasure hasn't been broken yet, and the Demon Throat has the Four Swords of Zhu Xian and the Diagram of the Zhu Xian Sword? The author can go and read the book of prehistoric times first, laugh to death, Good reviews are just for you to see!

This is my first time writing a book. I hope everyone will support me!

It's very interesting. It's just three words. It's not like the others. It's just adapted. The plot is different and it's more interesting. (๑•.•๑) Let's just say that it's not easy for the author to write this book. Please give it a good review. Don't give a negative review. Try not to give it an average rating. It's not easy for the author to write a book.

Good book. "The First Immortal in the Ancient World" is recommended for everyone to watch. The plot is rich, and among the characters, Tiandao is the funnier. Yinglong: Why didn't the master come? Heaven's way: What's wrong with me? Your name is Yinglong. You should follow the way of heaven and use your body to turn into the Yellow River! <^_^*> Lu Ya: Xiao Tiandao, are you insulting Pindao? <^ _ ^：> Tiandao: Yeah! Come again? (For plot development later, please read the book)

My gold coins are not free hehehe!

That's great (I can't think of anything to praise you other than this)

It's different from what I know about the prehistoric times, but the book is still very interesting.

The plot structure is rigorous and the characters are full-bodied. The only thing is that the heroine has not yet come out. Maybe it is because there is too little written. The author will give it a try.

I heard that giving negative reviews will attract the author🌝

I can write it, but can it be faster?