How Come All My Apprentices Have Become Bosses?

How should I put it? The plot has ups and downs, especially when it comes to the blood boiling sect. It is natural that sometimes mistakes will be made, but it does not affect it. It is still very different from traditional immortal cultivation novels. After all, Long Aotian will not directly

Reading this book feels like reading several books, and Tian Yuan's apprentice is the protagonist of other novels. The author is really imaginative 😂

There are too many flaws, and it will be difficult to deal with them for a while, so I won't just throw it out. There are too many foreshadowings in the later part of the book, and most of them are not filled in at the end, making the whole story seem unreasonable and unsmooth. There are many loopholes. The world view is obviously not big, it is just a mountain, a few secret realms, a few sects of cultivators, and all kinds of prophecies, monsters, and demonic cultivators. The whole book revolves around these things, because there are too many holes that cannot be filled in, and the writing is messy. The overall outline is very smooth and there are no exciting points, which may be the positioning of this book. The Tiandao here should be a role like the Jade Emperor who is the only one in the family. I only realized this when I was reading the last few chapters. The overall world view of this book is not clear at all. I'll talk about what left a deep impression on me and what I didn't fill in. There may be spoilers below, so don't read it if you haven't seen it. First, who is Tianyuan's prodigal master? He is very poor, but he has a lot of skills that are rarely seen in the outside world, and Tianyuan has passed him. We don't know why. I remember that Patriarch Qingtian practiced the incomplete Wushuang Finger, and his eldest disciple Xue Yan practiced Wushuang Finger. It seems that when he accepted his first disciple, he didn't have the natal magic weapon Tiandao Qishu. His ancestor practiced the incomplete Wushuang Finger. There is not much to say about the gold content of this technique, but the master behind the scenes did not explain it. Second, what is this system? According to the story, is it given by heaven? But the final task of the system is to seal the evil spirits. Doesn't this mean that Tian Yuan will not be allowed to take up the post of Heavenly Dao? If Tian Yuan was not decisive enough in killing, then Chen Changsheng, who started a fight with his fellow apprentices because of a woman's few words and caused a loss of life, would he qualify? Later, it was also introduced that the magic cultivator is just another different system, and it is also a person with emotions. Chen Changsheng, who had already done all this, just sealed the memory and was fine? There are many, many more, such as who is Tianjizi? He created two souls, Biqiong and Baguio, and required Mahayana to merge them. After the merger, they reached full level directly. Such a strong person is nameless and sexless. There is also Baguio and her two who have not explained their past lives. They should be both big bosses, but they are not mentioned. The article says that Xiaoye's Secret Realm is the real Tiandao Mountain, and the original one was imitated by two apprentices. So was there no one there at the original time? How did the other secret realms come about? In the early stage, it was said that the world is a game of chess, so where did this metal chess piece come from, why can it open various mechanisms, and who made it, or in other words, who played this chess piece.

This book is okay, it's interesting.

This is written in too much ink. I wrote 150 chapters for the sect competition in one month. It would be weird if someone read it. It's so bad. There are so many typos.

Nice character design! It's a pity that the word "Ping Ming" is always on base! No one else has written a story about exciting fights and monsters without a word of scare or run away. The content description is so poor! We should read more, learn more about unofficial history and learn more details from Jin Yong, Ba Jin and others! Don't let yourself become disinterested while reading and you have failed!

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I feel like I am being transported into the book. The plot in the book seems to be like reality.

It's quite interesting, but the character names are hard to come up with, so I brought in many characters from other novels 😂 It's really good