I Handcraft Bows and Crossbows to Support My Lovely Wife, and Now You Want Me to Become Emperor?

The beginning was good, but there were too many adjectives in the middle. It's much better now.

The plot is indeed exciting ~ but it is too long-winded. It describes a very simple thing with too many narrations and psychological activities. It is suggested that the author can streamline the narration description and focus on plot advancement.

The writing is pretty good, but sometimes there is too much nonsense.

It's very interesting, but I hope the author will be more restrained in using adjectives. Using too many adjectives will affect the perception.

What kind of thing is it without beginning or end?

The description is too personal, with a high degree of exaggeration and a lot of nonsense.

It's so long-winded. If you can explain something clearly in one sentence, use eight sentences to describe it. It's just a waste of time.

The author's plot and writing are very good, but it ended suddenly for some reason. Can the author not give us readers a reasonable explanation?

The content in the early stage is a bit cliché, but in the middle stage, meeting the Ye family and entering Kyoto are pretty good. The portrayals of different characters are also unique, with their own personality characteristics and independent behaviors. The chapters are a bit broken, and the updates are a bit slow, but it is very interesting and not bad.

I'm sure that Ye Qingluan and Xie Yunniang will be the protagonists in the harem. I didn't eat the phone! ! !