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It's a very good book, but the rating is low. According to the average level of Qimao, it should be at least 9 points. However, the low score of this book is not completely unreasonable. First, there are too many plots borrowed from other novels, which may seem like stitching together, which makes people feel that it lacks originality, although the setting of the whole book is actually quite interesting. Secondly, the plot is too complex and progresses very quickly, so those who are not bookworms will be dazzled and unable to immerse themselves in the plot. Third, the compact plot is originally an advantage, but because there are too many side plots, the characterization will appear shallow, like a dragonfly touching water, leaving no deep traces. All in all, this is a niche book that is only suitable for old bookworms who like unlimited reading and are nostalgic about reading, which is a bit of a pity.

What the hell are you writing, and you say that other female porn books are mindless and frustrating. Readers of yours also feel frustrated and uncomfortable reading this book. The author thinks that describing a lot of protagonists being framed is very novel, and the approach is different from other intellectual novels. The protagonist's character is erratic, and the supporting characters are as if they have brains. Anyone who sees the protagonist's big ideas wants to step on them and belittle them. He also describes in detail a lot of framed, ridiculed, and trampled, making the little people dance for a long time.

Apart from lowering one's intelligence, it's just lowering one's intelligence. I don't understand whether it feels good or not. I feel aggrieved after reading this. Can I write a book? It's nothing.

It's not good to watch. I watched it because the subject matter was novel. After watching it for a while, I can only say that it's inexplicable. I feel that the protagonist is like a psychopath. I can't figure out what kind of protagonist is being created. Some of the plots are also very sloppy. I don't recommend it very much.

It's a very common template novel, slap in the face again and again, pretentious again and again, matryoshka doll after matryoshka doll, with various system NPCs interspersed in the middle, but they don't have much brains, and when the fight starts at the beginning, the spectators have to retreat hundreds of miles to avoid being affected. Old bookworms are really tired of reading this. . .

It's impressive, but it still doesn't look good, and I don't understand it at all. The male protagonist was made to suffer in the middle, and it took him a long time to kill those systematic ones, which was not pleasant at all. Moreover, the female protagonist felt useless and did not promote the main plot. It felt a bit inexplicable.

The writing style is okay, but the author obviously didn't understand the positioning of his novel. The title and early stage are all in the direction of a refreshing novel, but in the middle, he wrote a lot of plots that make the male protagonist feel aggrieved. He can obviously nip all disgusting things in the cradle, but he just wants to make those villains feel happy for a while. He obviously can't let them eat, but must let them eat once or twice. I don't know if you don't know how to write exciting stories or if you want to write depressing stories halfway through, and you obviously made a mistake. Although the chat group is also a system, this kind of system functions more as a portal. Generally speaking, it will not overwhelm the guest and take the lead. It is mainly used to bring characters from other works into other worlds. You will directly become one of the golden fingers of the time traveler... Last but not least, the role of the master in the middle period is too few, right? Almost nothing! She is your heroine after all! Even if it has no effect on advancing the plot, you still have to write it so that she can be a poster girl. Otherwise, why would you want to set up a heroine? Wouldn't it be the end of the story if we just write that the protagonist is ruthless and then push the main plot without thinking? What you wrote like this is completely dissatisfying both sides and just blocked yourself!

After reading it for a day, I still feel that I still have more to say. Alas, I still like this subject very much, and the author's writing is also good. However, starting from the Nine Realm Alliance, I felt that the plot deviated from the outline, and many settings were missing. Maybe it was because the performance of the book was not good. At that time, the author seemed to have no longer wanted to write it. In the end, he turned out to be a eunuch. I! I! I! I still want to continue watching! ! ! Pity! Pity! Pity! 😭😭😭

Don't be fooled by the title. He killed someone but couldn't kill him and then let him go. The cave was blocked, the treasure was ruined and he got angry and gave him a chance to explain. Then he didn't kill him. It's really frustrating to watch.

Bad reviews, the more I write, the more I return. Gradually, the villains around me become successful. When I am reborn, I am still flying in the fog.