At the Beginning of My Life, My Life Comes to an End. My Beautiful Master Persuaded Me to Marry My Beloved Wife.

Post a new review. I have read many types of Hehuanzong novels, and this one is the most favorite for me (* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤The protagonist is a great elder, I should say he is a former great elder, he is very strong in that aspect (◦˙▽˙◦) Several junior sisters have their own characteristics, I hope they won't be too awesome. The plot, especially the male protagonist's woman, I have read a few fake ones before and immediately gave up. I define fake movies as the kind of mindless male protagonist who insists on having a woman get caught, and then the male protagonist awakens some ability to resolve the crisis. However, judging from the setting of this book, there should be no danger, and you can eat it with confidence. I have read the latest chapter and I don't see any poisonous points. I hope the author will continue to do so. It is the first time to write such a long praise for a novel. I hope it will increase the popularity of this book (๑°3°๑)

Not a troll, just my personal feelings. The writing style is quite satisfactory, but it is not arrogant or literate. It is occasionally humorous and the sentences are smooth. There are occasional flaws in the wording, but it has almost no impact. After all, everyone makes mistakes. In summary, it is not a writing practice work for newcomers. In terms of plot, as far as I am concerned, the early stages are actually relatively average, but the latest chapter is starting to get interesting. If I maintain the level, it will be a book that starts low and ends high. As for the system, I don't know if the author did it intentionally or if he really forgot about it, but the system is basically invisible in the back. I personally prefer that this was done intentionally by the author to pave the way for the subsequent plot. If you are slapped in the face, just pretend that I didn't say anything. In terms of emotions, I don't know if it's because the author is preparing for the foreshadowing. In my personal opinion, except for a limited number of characters such as Tu, Gu Fang, Yin, and Si, the emotional scenes of the other characters are a bit thin. But whether it is foreshadowing or not, the author should spend a little more time writing some emotional scenes of other characters. Thunder point, for me, the author has done a pretty good job in avoiding lightning. At least for me personally, there is basically no lightning. If I insist on talking about it, it is the plot of Jiang's apprentice. In my opinion, this is really pure and devoid of emotions, pure deception. If it is not for foreshadowing, I hope the author will make some patches in the future plot. Of course, it may be that I did not read carefully. If this happens, just treat me as farting. There is also the plot of the latest two chapters, which may be a lightning point for some friends. Here is a slight spoiler. If you mind, don't scroll down. Just read the final summary. If you don't mind, you can see if it is your lightning point. However, I hope you can speak rationally and do not have any offensive behavior towards the author regardless of whether it is. Spoiler warning That is to say, the current time and space of the protagonist is not his original time and space, but a parallel time and space with him as the anchor point. And he himself probably entered this time and space when he went to Baihua Sect to inquire. In his original time and space, most of the heroines are pure Hehuan Sect witches. From my personal understanding, before going to Baihua Sect, the Hehuan Sect women who had relationships with the protagonist in his original world are all pure Hehuan Sect witches. As for why the protagonist was not sucked dry, the author did not explain, and I will not make any guesses. Maybe he forgot, or maybe it was a foreshadowing. In summary, I can see that there are no particularly big flaws in the logic so far. The writing style is relatively smooth. The early stage is not attractive enough, but the later stage is much better. It is a book that starts low and moves high. If it can maintain the standard and not be cut in half, it should become a very good book. Come on, author, please update more. I hope you don't forget the essence of enjoyable writing. I read books for pleasure while following logic, not for torture. I won't say anything more about your invincible flow. *The above is just my personal opinion, discussion is welcome, please don't criticize if you don't like it.

Hao Kan, this book reminds me of the Hehuan Sect that was suppressed by Heaven. I hope this book will not be suppressed by Heaven.

The plot of the book is very good👌🏻The subject matter is good, please update it soon

The plot is coherent and smooth, and the characters are clear. What secrets does Jun Tianling have? ! !

Next door Xianyu Laobai's Hehuan Sect has been banned. You have to grasp the scale. I think it's okay to write a little more eight or nine thousand chapters.

I am a member specially opened for you. I read more than 90 chapters in one day and night. I hope I can continue to maintain the writing style of the previous period. Come on!

The more you read, the more you read. The stories are interlocking and perfectly connected for thousands of years and hundreds of years. There are almost no bugs. I recommend it and hurry up!

Mainly the female characters are beautiful and active

Thanks a lot.