Peerless Wind King

I am the author of this book. I welcome everyone's advice, hehehe

When did Lin Xueyan know that Qin Feng was Nuonuo's biological father?

Update it! I'm anxious to watch it, it's so beautiful

Apologize. Apologize, apologize, read dozens of chapters. All you do is reveal your identity and then make people apologize. Have you never been humbled by others in your life??

The writing is messy and looks weird.

What the hell are they writing? They just pretend every day and then make people apologize. My three-year-old nephew can write better than this.

The logic is completely confusing. At first, it was said that there would be a cocktail party where all the famous people in Jiangcheng got to know each other, but in a blink of an eye, these famous people jumped out one by one to load coins. There are also three people who come and write about it and become two people; some people escape without being beaten to death, but in the next chapter they become beaten to death without slipping away; originally it was a normal boxing, but then it became Qigong against waves, and then it turned into traveling through the void. The writing style is like that of a primary school student, and there are only a few adjectives used. Just read the first 100 chapters to feel refreshed.

It's inexplicable, and I wonder if the author is short-sighted.

There is a problem with the author's logic, and there is also a problem with people's emotions. When his daughter was beaten, he was just angry at the time. When everyone came after the incident, it was hastily done, making it difficult for people to take part in it. Everyone went to the introduction party, and in the end, no one in the four major families knew the name of the protagonist. I can still write this. Is it a good review?

Very ugly! 1. The previous plot is just okay. It's just a pretense. It's understandable and makes sense. 2. The subsequent plot starts from about chapter 200, and it is a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. 3. By about 300 chapters, I can run out of people. Originally there was a good guy in the previous chapter, but in the next chapter the good guy is no longer there, he has become a bad guy, and one character is missing. 4. What follows is simply a piece of cake. I can't stand it no matter what. 5. I said, I can bear it, but after seeing 400 chapters, I went crazy and came here to write a book review. I advise everyone, don't read it. Although it's okay at the beginning, you'll want to die at the end. Bye-Bye!