The Campus Queen and My Childhood Friend Fall for Me

Overall, it's a very confusing content, and I'm not sure about the target at all. The male protagonist gives people an inexplicable "love each other when I meet them" feeling. Secondly, there are many conflicts in details, such as ["Bai Feng" and "Jiang Yu"], ["Songjiang University" and "Mingzhu University"], ["Xu Feifei" and "Xu Feifei"]

I was really speechless. The male protagonist always thought he was affectionate and devoted, and secretly thought about male thieves and female prostitutes. Bai Xiaoyue was actually the best to her and deserved the most love. But in the end, she was forced to transfer to another school by her mother and was forced to break up with her. Bai Xiaoyue had no choice but to give her the first time before leaving. As a result, the male protagonist thought he had been dumped and turned around and fucked Xu Feifei. Bai Xiaoyue begged him for help, but she still disliked her and even used a loudspeaker. Hua ruined someone else's proposal to Bai Xiaoyue. What's even more annoying is that revenge always only knows how to take action. There is no appearance at all. He talks about affection on his lips, and directly pushes the woman behind his back to retaliate. In the end, he even thinks of tricking PUA Jian Qiyuan and forcing her to applaud him. Chun Chun is a hypocrite. His biological mother apologized to him, and he even drags her with 258,000 yuan. This is just a scumbag. I don't understand how the author wrote such a rotten person.

There are two failings, 1. The stallion is not a stud, 2. The hatred for the biological parents is inexplicable. Why do you say that? First of all, he is not an orphan, and his adoptive parents are very good to him. Logically speaking, it is impossible for him to hate his parents. Then, when his biological parents find him, the normal behavior is that they are strange and unacceptable at best, but they will not produce hatred. 3. He said that he hates his parents because they abandoned him, but the fact is that there was an earthquake and he was lost. As a result, it became the reason for him to hate his biological parents all his life. A child can't think even if he is in his twenties. It's really childish.

This book contains all kinds of little things in life. Let me experience the joy of life.

I don't want to comment on any bad novel you wrote. It's just random writing. I don't know why the rating is so high. Look at what you wrote for Bai Xiaoyue. The plot is really rubbish! If you don't know how to write novels, then don't write them. Don't be disgusting. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is really difficult to describe in one sentence!

Not bad. Until now, I have changed my name and everything.

The logic is confusing, the sentences do not make sense, and the names of people are confused.

Real review, I have read a lot of this kind of campus urban novel. This author's writing style is not good. I feel like there is no outline. He can write whatever he wants. The plot is confusing and makes people angry. He portrays the characters plainly, but he doesn't know how to write a novel. I don't know if those good reviews are just based on it. It's amazing. The girl named Bai is not bad, but how did the author write it?

The author has almost no bottom line, and I don't know what the second-rate level is. The emotional description of the male protagonist is like a piece of cake that makes people feel sick after reading it. He has unclear and entangled relationships with multiple women. It seems that the relationship between one falling in love with the other does not seem to have a female protagonist. I originally thought that Jian Qiyuan was the female protagonist, but it seems that I am overthinking and ruining people's views. It's okay not to read it.

In fact, there is a story, and the overall setting of the story is pretty good. But the chaotic relationship with several girls later surprised me. Moreover, the several development lines of the male protagonist are also difficult to stick to. It's a pity that I thought it was a novel that I could continue to follow, but now I have no choice but to abandon the book.