It Turns Out That I Am an Expert Outside the World

I have complained about a lot of books. The story of this book is a bit streamlined, but the concept is much newer than those old books, and it is not good to use the word "mighty master" all the time. It is better to change it to "immortal" or something like that. The word "mighty master" is too vulgar, the plot development is too slow, and the characters are all too straightforward one after another, and there is no clear hierarchy or classification. The realm has become so simple for you. There are not too many fighting scenes and touching scenes. It is best not to have a harem group later. That would be too boring. Countless books are like this. Pay attention to more cultivation techniques. After all, it is also a world of cultivating immortals. How can it be without some magic? The rest is okay. Pay attention to perfection and details. The structure is compact and the framework is wider. Don't There is not much to write about, and the ending is sloppy. It is better to update it quickly, because I have read the good novel "Nine Turns of God" by Qiu Shan Laogui and "The Strongest Qi Refining Period in History" written by someone else. These two are pretty good, but the first update is too slow and loses its appeal, so its popularity has declined. The second one is okay, but the update is still a bit slow. So I hope you will update soon and create a wider and more realistic world without being limited. There is a character with the same name as the author in "The God of Nine Turns" who is also called Prisoner Mountain Old Ghost. This is actually a kind of immersive feeling that the author personally enters the novel and integrates it into your heart. You can also write your own pen name into it to become an invincible existence and occasionally appear as a character in the decrypted novel. I hope these suggestions will be adopted, and I will give you general encouragement. I hope they will be useful to you by giving me a good review and some gold coins. 😂

This book is undoubtedly an excellent book. I came in to read it after reading the reviews. As for the content of the reviews, I did not read them. I only saw that the ratio of negative reviews to positive reviews is about 1:30, which is a very high praise rate on this platform. It can be said that it has received rave reviews. I have directly caught up with the latest chapters in the past few days. Let me praise you first. First, the biggest highlight of this book is the setting that the protagonist thinks he is a mortal, which leads to a series of misunderstandings, mistakes, and so on. The plot can be said to be quite exciting, and one word stands out: coincidence. What is rare is that I have not seen any logical illogicalities in these plots. All kinds of coincidences make sense, and there is nothing wrong with it. Second, it can be seen from the plot arrangement that the author is very careful. At least there are not many typos. Not to mention how awesome the author's writing style is, at least the book looks smooth, comfortable, relaxed and humorous. I have read many negative reviews saying that the update is slow. If you ask me to say that it is more detailed, the update is slow, there are only two or three chapters a day, isn't it? Isn't it the same if you raise it for a while and see again? I don't have to say too much about it, but it is definitely a good book. Regardless of the characteristics of the book, whether the logic is rigorous, whether the quotations are smooth, and the author's level of care, it can all be praised. However, there are also many shortcomings. I hope the author can see it by giving me some advice. First of all, there is the issue of updating. I hope the author can save the chapters in advance so that the updates will not be interrupted. What if something happens one day and the updates are not interrupted? There is no doubt that this will lose some readers, and it is more than just this effect. Saving good chapters first will ensure the logical integrity of the story. I have read many books that start at the end but end at the end. I hope the author can maintain an attitude of striving for excellence. Let's talk about some issues with the book itself. Xia Yan's identity is the princess of the Xia Kingdom. Soon she learned that this Xia Kingdom is not as good as the Taihua Sect, but it seems that only one Xia Kingdom is mentioned in the whole article, right? There are various sects in other ministries and places, and no country appears anymore. The same problem happened. The first time the protagonist appeared to play the piano, the system had a system that added a certain amount of experience points, but it never appeared again. These two problems caused me to be a bit confused in the early stage. I don't know if everyone noticed it. Another problem is the routine. The word "dao" at the door is so useless that it makes me feel a little numb after reading more than 200 chapters. This varies from person to person. Some people will definitely think it is boring while others will find it boring. But I think the author should come up with a new plot. The previous coincidences were too amazing, which will inevitably raise the readers' expectations. If it keeps repeating, the reviews will definitely take a turn for the worse. So I hope the author will work harder, save the chapters, and maintain the integrity and excitement of the story. Finally, I wish this novel will become more and more popular. I won't talk about it anymore. I'm in a book shortage. I decided to read it again from the beginning hahaha

What should I say? I will express my opinion. Please don't criticize me if you are dissatisfied. Everyone treats him like a fairy, and as a result, the entire book (not yet finished) emphasizes that the protagonist thinks he is not powerful, and the things he was given in the early stage were praised and praised, and writing about powerful things seems boring. What will happen if we really start cultivating immortals later? One second is the highest combat power.

Empress Henggu appears on the stage. What name do you want to give her? The title of this empress is left to everyone. Whichever title has the most likes will be used.

It's too slow, fatten it up and then kill it

The first part is fine, but the more you write, the more watery it becomes. The Pacific Ocean is not as watery as you. If you repeat it over and over again, you can write a chapter with one sentence. The protagonist has always been a side character, and the few chapters I finally wrote are basically all nonsense. I wrote a lot of side characters. Moreover, only those few words are used to describe characters. No matter what things are, they are added with the word "big", some big skills, big costs, big horrors, or "too much" or "don't mention it." It feels like someone is chanting sutras to you, and he keeps chanting those few words, which makes you almost crazy.

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I entered the "World of Cultivation" at the age of four; I practiced "Heavenly Sword Royal Dao" at the age of five; I practiced the magical skill "Nine Transformations of the True Spirit" at the age of six; I went through the "Nine Tribulations"; I finally perfected this skill at the age of fourteen; From then on, I became "famous"; As everyone knows, I got the "Divine Seal Throne" at the age of fifteen; I inherited the "Emperor" at the age of eighteen; "Dyeing Life"; known as the "God of Killing" by the world; however, the long practice of "Shinto" never ends; taking the "Spirit Boat" with "Six Paths Immortal Lord", "Master of the Dao", "Xuan Emperor", "Sword Ancestor" and others, "Wu Po Jiuxiao" to "Douluo Continent"; founded "Peerless Tang Sect"; by chance, found "Martial Tomb" under a "Blood-Stained Totem" in "Holy Ruins", and obtained I got the unique skill "Origin of the Universe" inherited from "God of War", and wanted to "fight through the sky", "swallow the starry sky", and "cover the sky" with one hand; later, I accidentally entered the "Eternal Life Realm" and caused a huge disaster, and was known by the "Holy King", leading the "Dragon Blood God of War", "War Lord", "Mad God", and invited several immortal masters from the "Dragon Clan" to come from the "Spiritual Realm", and started with me in the "Battle Sky Continent" "The Shocking Battle" will eventually kill you all; however, "Heaven's Merciless" sneaked up on me when I was seriously injured and sent down "Heavenly Blood Tribulation". Fortunately, "The Good God of Death" helped me to survive; later, I walked out of "God's Tomb" and created my own martial arts such as "Star Transformation", "Inch Light", "Nine Heaven Star Technique", and killed "Coiling Dragon" in the nine heavens to become the strongest person in the world, which is known to everyone. As a result, I unfortunately read this book, which led to a riot in my true energy, led me to become possessed, and ultimately led to my death. I was not willing to accept it.

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Just show off, nothing else. Don't let others think you are awesome, and then do it. Everyone says you are awesome. Let others also prove that you are a big boss, and then what can you do?