You Fight for Hegemony While I Farm

What about the next chapters, no more technology?

Didn't understand the end

The evil pit on the chessboard island has not been filled, and the war at the end developed too unreasonably.

First of all, the beginning is good, but the second half is a bit messy, and the ending was not written carefully and ended in a hurry.

It was okay at first, but then it became contradictory.

The pit was buried but not filled, the story line was opened and ended hastily, and the time-travel setting was not followed. All in all, I feel like I just write whatever comes to my mind. When I remember, I write a few strokes. If I can't remember, just write it down.

There are many holes that have not been filled

Very nice, compact and surprisingly good results

Xiaobaiwen, just so-so