The First Sword Immortal

The ultimate refreshing article, there are no details in refining medicine, and advancing is like drinking water. Moreover, it is still a monk novel, focusing on a story without emotions or desires. 😂 Before Chapter 50, it was somewhat interesting, but after changing the pictures, the ideas became the same. Make enemies first, and then you'll kill whoever you see again.

The protagonist's combat power is too weak, and he doesn't even have the strength to fight across a small realm.

I feel the writing is better than Taihuang Tuntian Jue

The plot is confusing, and the whole book seems to be out of wits. There are many dandies everywhere, and everyone who sees the protagonist provokes the protagonist. It feels like you can't write if you don't provoke or belittle the protagonist. And it stands to reason that the protagonists are all famous and have superb medical skills, but those famous nobles continue to seek death as if they don't have any information. And the routines are all based on beating the young and the old...

I can't watch it any longer. I always feel stuck like a computer. The plot doesn't go well and it feels a bit confusing. There are several sword halls at the beginning, then several academies, then several countries. I don't know what the focus is.

It's not that it doesn't look good, it's just that it's sloppy and even a bit childish in many places…

If these few words make a novel uncomfortable to read, I will always give a negative review. No matter how good the plot is in a novel like this, it's useless

The plot was a bit slow and there was too much nonsense.

I want to write the main character to be awesome, but the chapters are still too long. Not worth watching

Suppressing the development of the protagonist and forcibly reducing the intellectual plot