The First Sword Immortal

This is an extremely satisfying read; the alchemy process is devoid of detail, and advancement is as easy as drinking water. Plus, it's a monk story, emphasizing a life devoid of worldly desires. 😂 The first fifty chapters were somewhat interesting, but after the illustrations were changed, the plot became repetitive: first create enemies, then defeat whoever you encounter.

I feel it's better written than the Great Desolate Devouring Heaven Technique.

The protagonist's combat power is too weak; he doesn't even have the strength to fight across a minor realm.

The plot is chaotic, the whole book feels like it's lost its mind, there are spoiled brats everywhere, everyone seems to be provoking the protagonist, as if the author can't write without provoking and belittling him. And logically, the protagonist should have earned a reputation and superb medical skills, but those noble families seem completely oblivious and keep courting disaster. Plus, the plot always follows the same formula: the younger generation gets beaten up first, then the older ones…

I can't watch it anymore. It keeps lagging, just like a computer screen. The plot is disjointed and feels chaotic. There are several sword clubs at the beginning, then several academies, then several countries. I don't know what the main point is.

It's not that it's bad, but there are many careless and even childish parts...

Any novel that consists of just a few words that make it uncomfortable to read, I will give it a bad review. No matter how good the plot is, it's useless if the novel is like that.

It's great, exciting, but the updates are too slow. Please update more often!

The plot is a bit slow, and there's too much unnecessary dialogue.

The author tries to make the protagonist incredibly powerful, but the chapters are rambling and verbose. Not worth reading.