After I Made My Girlfriend Official, My First Love’s Older Sister Lost It

Could this be written by a human? Damn, I'm really speechless. Brothers, please figure it out for yourself. I don't know where this came from. We simply don't treat readers as human beings. Don't we have no brains?

Sometimes it looks good, sometimes it's okay

Repeatedly subdue the heroine, and then the male villain repeatedly jumps sideways and poisons her to death😓

It was good at the beginning, but why did she become more and more intelligent after half the time? The heroine became a pure intellectual. Please change it quickly. Author

Decrease wisdom

The heroine hangs up. Is this a harem story? The more I watch it, the more disturbing it gets😓

It was well written at the beginning, but it felt nonsense later on. Wasted front. Moreover, this book is too long. If the best plot is not working, I will stop it and continue writing. It is unnecessary. There is no need for a dragon with a pig body.

The male protagonist looks like a turtle, it makes me sick to my stomach.

It's still okay in the front, but why is it so ridiculous in the back? Let's change it.

The male protagonist has some 🐢male and licking🐩 attributes, and the female protagonist cannot be driven away. At the end, the author even pulled a big one