The First Genius

After showing his face, many readers asked if he was the real one. Yes, old fans of the dragon-marked God of War can't find the way.

How can I put it, this is something that other novels don't have. The protagonist and his friends and family love him along the way. There is no antagonism between the brothers, only brothers and sisters respect each other. I love this feeling.

I feel like the protagonist's talent is mediocre, and I've read Chapter 400. I have always emphasized that when the Supreme Body grows up, it can become invincible in the same realm, but now that it has reached the Aspiration Realm, the protagonist has always jumped 5-6 small levels, and there is no way to reach the ninth level within the same realm. It is also said that the protagonist's Supreme Body is stronger than the Emperor's Supreme Body. This is a bug buried by the author, and it cannot be justified now.

So far so good. I hope you don't overdo it when writing about women. No woman can avenge herself even if she cries. In the previous book, Xia Yingying refused to kill her father when she cried. It was really disgusting.

There were 5 robbers trying to kill you, but you only killed one and let four robbers go. It was the reincarnation of the Virgin, and the protagonist was hunted down and ridiculed wherever he went.

The outline is good, the writing is average, and the description makes people feel that their IQs are very superficial. Normally speaking, those with higher levels live longer, and they are all human beings. The books write about pigs, and when they can't fight the opponent, they jump out, put their lives in the hands of others, and expect miracles to happen. Isn't this just a lack of brainstem? Every normal person will run away and wait until he becomes stronger. When I came back, I started to jump after saying nothing at first, and what I wrote about Daxia was that the Ling clan was the largest, and the emperor had no face. The protagonist had a dragon gate ten feet high, and no one cared about the great potential of the Alchemy Holy Body. They were all so short-sighted. What's more, what they wrote about was that the Ling clan covers the sky with one hand, and there is no one who can compete with it or dares to compete. So what else is there to do? Just kill them.

There is nothing to say about the second grade. Except for the protagonist, everyone else has no IQ, and many settings are also problematic.

You have to have some brains when writing a book, right? Let me ask you, as soon as you get to the new map, a child has top-level combat power. Why, does it mean that it will rise to a great level every year from birth? More outrageous than the protagonist? Can a small realm rise in a few days? Hu Zhi also needs some reasonable foreshadowing, right?

This rhythm still looks comfortable

Good-looking, funny, killing, family love, like it