One Day of Creation, Gou Zai Xianwu Became the Taoist Ancestor

It's not bad, but it's disgusting that you still stay here and get harassed all the time after being treated maliciously by the sect, and later help the sect train people.

The plot setting is reasonable and fascinating

You can say ten sentences in one sentence, purely for the purpose of coding

Drive high and go low, if you can't write about cultivating immortality, don't write about it!

1 The advantage of Hongmeng Holy Body is not strong. 2 Formations, refining medicine and weapons, you don't need to learn anything, you can do it all, you are a talented person. 3. There are no martial arts skills, such as swords, knives, fists, palms, etc. They all rely on a Hongmeng Holy Body. This body is just a dead body. 4 Without experience and inheritance, the protagonist does not see any training system such as body skills, sword skills, boxing skills, etc.! It's a bit early to reach the mysteries of space after just a few levels of advancement. Generally speaking, it does not reflect how powerful the protagonist is. The Holy Body of Hongmeng is really useless. The core function of the Hongmeng Creation Diagram is not reflected.

There are basically no vulgar techniques and few language errors.

It seems that the protagonist is a bit cowardly and not suitable for martial arts

Update it quickly. If it's too slow, people will transfer it to books. No one will wait. There are too many books.

Wonderful plot

The protagonist has grown step by step from a chief disciple who was slandered and expelled from the sect to a person who can defeat the will of heaven and earth. I think it's pretty good, don't complain. I listened while dancing