Unrivaled

When I became obsessed with novels, the first book I read was Ni Cangtian Da's God of Death. Although I was only a 15-year-old junior high school student at the time, I really thought it was very good-looking. Unfortunately, Qimao didn't have this book. Even after so many years, when I read novels, I still search for Ni Cangtian Da's novels first. The God of Death is really good-looking and I love it. I hope Ni Cangtian Da can read it and I love it~\(≧▽≦)/~

Ni Cangtian, your novel is very imaginative and enjoyable, but there are three points that make it unreadable. First, there are too many reversals, too frequently, which looks tiring and messy. Second, it is not very smooth. Halfway through the plot, I suddenly write several paragraphs to introduce the background and history. Doing this frequently seems very tiring. I don't know what other readers think. Anyway, I won't be too entangled in the history behind it. Is it logical or not? The most important thing is to be able to read it smoothly. Finally, the way you break up sentences is very strange. I can understand that you deliberately shorten longer sentences to make it easier for readers to read. However, sometimes improper breaking of sentences makes it more difficult to read and can cause ambiguity. Because of the pitfalls of "God of Killing", I hope that the master can write another masterpiece comparable to "God of Killing".

This "Unparalleled World" is indeed good, better than "The King of Ten Thousand Realms"! "The God of Death" by Xiao Ni is the first novel I have read. I have read it more than ten times. It is really good. Keep up the good work! But you should also smoke less and take care of your children and wife👀

In terms of realm, no one in the book is lower than the protagonist. In terms of pretense, the supporting characters in the book combined are not as numerous as the protagonist. Even if you don't have B, you have to look for B equipment everywhere. After reading about 200 chapters, you can't stand it any longer. Every time you install B, the enemy will blow him to death in one breath. In the end, he will either be driven away by the eloquent words, or the protagonist will be forced to download the dungeon to upgrade equipment. You only need to step on the tightrope once. If it's a scene, you have to step on it. Aren't you afraid of falling to death?

Overall it's pretty good. But it feels like something is lacking. 1. The protagonist is a god-level fifth-grade alchemist. I feel that the number of times I have made alchemy is too few! 2. The protagonist has been improving himself, but there are too few fighting scenes. Basically it's all treasure battles. 3. I don't see why the protagonist deliberately hides his identity. His senior brother is just at ease, and the protagonist's friends and beauties are better than his senior brother. He can definitely inherit the Medicine God Sect

Okay, not bad, very imaginative. I have read novels for so many years, and I think this one is really good, okk

The writing is so good, a fantasy book is written like a suspense film. Is it easy to fill the holes you dug? There are seven or eight pits in one scene, what the heck, you probably have to explain too many things in the early stage.

I read hundreds of chapters. I can't stand it anymore. The beginning is very exciting, but in the middle, it all depends on external forces. The protagonist's cultivation is different whether he cultivates or not. The whole book is based on the sword power gained at the beginning. Fighting all depends on weapons, or the author forcefully explains it. Anyway, as long as the author says whoever wins, he will win regardless of the difference. If you like to read ten lines at a time, don't read it. If you don't have enough imagination, don't read it. Otherwise, you will know what you are doing one second, but you will not know what happened the next second. Moreover, the protagonist's purpose of concealing his identity was not apparent. You have offended so many people who are stronger than Yaozong, are you still afraid of exposing your identity?

I had always watched it well, but when the five major gangs attacked the land of Xuanyue, I felt that the protagonist had become useless. He was either dizzy or fighting with others. He would talk nonsense and do nothing. His powers were gone and he relied on luck to survive.

The male protagonist has a lot of brains💩