Beginning of the Conferred God: I Set up a Formation on Jin'ao Island to Block the Gate

The rewards are repeated and embarrassing to the point where the assistant teacher is getting better and better at writing small roles.

Anyway, it's just a running account. It can't be said to be good-looking, nor can it be said to be very bad. You can also take a look at it when you have free time.

How should I put it, the first two hundred and fifty or sixty chapters, it seems to be okay, even if it is crushed, it will not be easy for anyone to come when the big formation is opened, no matter whether you are a saint or whoever you are. Although there are many mistakes, we can still look past them. More than two hundred and sixty years later, I feel like the author is trying to break a wall. The West Sea incident has ended, the betrayal has been betrayed, the people have been eliminated, and the treasure money and the Qibao tree have also been stolen. Some time later, the protagonist placed a formation outside Chaoge City, trapping Nezha, Yuding Zhenren, Daoxing Tianzun and others. As a result, the real person Yuding repeatedly appeared in Yuxu Palace to talk to Yuan. This was not too outrageous. Yuan's instigator was a traitor who had been expelled from the Chan Cult. Ran Deng and Guang Chengzi followed Anji to the formation outside Chaoge City, and a few people were trapped. In the end, several people went, and they were called I went to Yang Jian in the Zhou camp outside the city, and then I don't know how the author arranged it. I went to the West Sea and spent a long time... I didn't understand. The formation and the trapped people were all outside Chaoge City. Ran Deng and the others also went outside Chaoge City. Why did they go to the West Sea? Then, the protagonist used the Chaos Clock to kill Ran Deng openly. He turned back to Tongtian and told him, don't leak the Chaos Clock thing... I and Yuan Yuan saw it when you used it, right? Why didn't you leak the method? Covering one's ears and stealing the bell? Anyway, it's so confusing... I can't stand it anymore.

It's too unpalatable. Not only are the rewards single, but the characters are also confusing. What does it mean that Yang Jian doesn't know Haotian? Haotian and Yaochi are husband and wife. It's just a mess.

Written by AI! Chapters are confusing and repetitive, making it hard to read

There are many places in a mess. The magic weapon was taken away from the front, but it is still in the back.

The author still has some ideas, but it is also very toxic. The biggest one is the introduction of the love between men and women, which is off-putting. The Supreme God of Heaven regards all living beings as ants. Whatever you gain, you must lose! Once you enter the immortal gate, cut off the mortal world! How could an immortal possess the emotions and desires of a mortal ant? If immortals can also get married and have children, in their billions of years of life, trillions of immortal descendants have already occupied every corner of the universe. Where would there be room for mortals?