Jianlai: Ning Yao Goes Big, Xiu Goes Small

How to put it? I want to know how the author writes. The original Jianlai is not finished yet, so the author is writing it slowly according to the original work or... (I don't know) but I like this book very much because most people who write Jianlai fan novels are human beings. But this one is Chen Pingan from the earth. He traveled to Jianlai and became Chen Pingan in the original book. So when writing the Jianlai fan novel, I felt that if I wanted to time travel, I would become Chen Pingan. Chen Pingan is just like everyone in our real life, so I hope the author can write it how we want. I personally don't like the opportunity of those people wearing swords to cut off Hu and Chen Pingan (I don't know why I just don't like it, this is my personal opinion), so I still like Chen Pingan like this😊

I am an author, give myself a good review, no problem 😂😂😂

This book is basically a copy of Jian Lai. It is less inscrutable than the original text, but more realistic. Therefore, firstly, because the original text Jian Lai is very beautiful in itself, and secondly because of the realism of this book. Although it is a little more vulgar, it is precisely because of these vulgarities that it looks more realistic, so I still like this book very much.

The plot is pretty good. The plot in Jian Lai's fanfic is quite good. It's just that the writing style needs to be improved. For example, the following words can be omitted.

I wrote about the sword, so I wrote about the sword. I also brought Liu Shen into it. I guess I haven't read the Perfect World novels. I just watched the anime and thought Liu Shen was good-looking, so I brought her in. Yy. First, understand the Perfect world view. His combat power is the same as a lump💩

The writing is too plain and the ideas are too silly. At the Mufu realm, the strength is only 200 kilograms, and he is still using dragon blood stone to train his body. This is pretty good, but the subsequent descriptions of Li Liu and Ning Yao are too silly. And severe YY

The protagonist is just like a hanging thread. The author might as well have written about seizing the body and merging souls. I really didn't see Chen Pingan's perseverance. It was a bit insulting to Chen Pingan. I really didn't understand Chapter 68. The injuries were really unnecessary and nothing was gained in exchange. If you want to call Liu Shen, you might as well call him earlier. Later, you fight Ma Kuxuan. Jian Lai also suffered serious injuries in the original text. The fight was still back and forth. But you were promoted to the second martial arts mirror. The fight was even more embarrassing than the original text. The price was higher. I don't know what to say.

Chapter 68 was read in vain. For most of the day, no one could be killed. With Liu Shen as his backing, it was useless. Since it was written that Liu Shen came in, it was necessary to understand clearly that even if it was only part of it, the power level was different. In particular, Liu Shen here is still awake, and the state he describes is pretty good. To kill Ma Kuxuan, you have to write a body that is taken away by people outside. To put it bluntly, you can't die. The disgusting thing has to be kept for fun. It's not just a supporting role. The supporting role is to match the protagonist, not the protagonist to match the supporting role, but Tiangang.

I hope that I can make up for some regrets, and I also hope that the sword can connect with the world view of a perfect world. At least Shi Hao can be accompanied at critical moments so that he no longer faces all that alone!

I really like watching it now. I have the opportunity and I have a heroine.