Extra Points for the Doomsday: I Will Bring My Brothers to Defeat the Apocalypse

First: The preface does not match the postscript. It was said before that the tyrant has all attributes of 30 points, and the protagonist has all attributes of 40 points to stabilize the pressure. Later, it is said that the tyrant has all attributes of 30 points, and the actual ability is about 50 points. Then when the protagonist has the power of greed, he also has superpowers. It is so difficult to win when it is 6-7 points higher than his attributes. How can he stabilize the pressure of the tyrant? Second: As mentioned earlier, the tyrant came out to plunder, and many people died together to kill him, but before the tyrant came, Lei Wanjun had all attributes of 70, and his good brother had all attributes of 40, and they all cared about the Visitor from Another World mission. Even if the protagonist did not appear in the previous life, it is written in the article that Lei Wanjun cares about his good brother must be his good brother's last hit after being disabled, so it still does not fit in with the following text. Third: There are really a lot of dialogues in this street. If there were less dialogues that just come and go with a few meanings, the current word count of about 400,000 would be reduced by many thousands. The dialogues are really long-winded.

Finally, it's not the rebirth and hoarding flow anymore, the hoarding theme is so boring. Thank you so much, this article is my favorite personal heroism, apocalyptic novel without a heroine. There will be no need for female protagonists in the future. The most handsome male protagonists are those who focus on their careers. Come on! 21 Votes for you 🎫.

"Doomsday Plus" is highly not recommended! The early part of this book was okay, but there were a lot of holes left unfilled, the plot was confusing, and the word count was very low. The end of the book was basically messy, with various worlds running around, making it completely unreadable!

At the beginning, I thought the male protagonist was a king... But who knew he was actually a father-in-law. Even if there are so many beauties around you. But it can't change my father-in-law's fate! Take a trip here.

Overall, it's okay, but it's too verbose and watery. One is a running account. The second is that there are too many passers-by. Every time there are a bunch of narrations, it's very annoying. Every time I kill something and do something, a bunch of people are watching. I first ridicule and seek death, and then I'm shocked. Awesome. Why do you have so many narrations? Set off?

In the apocalypse, no matter what pig's feet do, there will be so many melon-eating people looking down on and ridiculing them. There are also pig's trotters and Gua. Wang Lie is at the same level as pig's trotters. They all hit pig's trotters' hometown. I was also drunk.

Advantages: Don't be sloppy, don't be decisive in killing, just kill directly without too many beeps. Good looking, one of the few good apocalyptic stories

I can't see it, the combat power collapses too quickly, and there are also problems with the design of the combat power system. There are so many magic crystals, why doesn't the protagonist just pile resources on a few people and become invincible? Also, the protagonist kills 20,000 people with one thunderbolt. How thick is the thunderbolt that can kill 20,000 people? Even if there are 20,000, then why only 1.5 Million have been killed after one chapter? The protagonist has not killed more than that.

Simple logic, childish white text

It's just so so, especially the narration of those melon-eating people makes me want to vomit.