National NPC: I Can Kill Players

What can I say about the book? The content is novel. Maybe most book friends can't accept the settings of earthly NPCs. It's true that the players are too perverted. However, this book reflects reality. In fact, it can be seen that the same is true in real life. You will know if you read it carefully. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Thank you.

How can I put it this way? The protagonist is not absolutely cold-blooded, nor is she a virgin, nor does she start a harem group and focus on falling in love. And although this book is based on an earthly NPC, the concept is okay.

Advantages: Novel settings Disadvantages Are you sure this protagonist is not a joke? You start with a female character, and it looks good at first, but why does the tea smell so bad for no reason? Why do you think I'll stay whenever you say something? Isn't it funny? If you don't tell me that you like yourself, but people still ask you to stay, aren't you independent and independent? It's really Chinese-style women who are independent. They rely on men to spend money and do things. They only rely on themselves when they brag about themselves. They avoid it with their mouths. If they really put in effort, they turn around and stare at the men! After that, they still frown. What a beast. The same goes for the male protagonist. You have been tossing with a rag for several years, but you are still like a woman who has never seen a woman. You just say what you like, you are sullen, and you dare to tease me in your heart. Damn it. What kind of mental health is this? As for the strength, haha, that's embarrassing. Besides being able to kill players, what else can you use to brag about alone? You alone can kill multiple players, but what use are you to working with a trade union or other organizations that have some organization? It doesn't take much, as long as it's not a high-frequency and large-scale instant kill, it's enough to deal with hundreds of you.

Holy Mother, if you see a woman unable to walk and her personality collapsed, she is just a stallion.

The plot is novel without losing depth The writing is delicate, and the psychological and action descriptions complement each other, making the overall rhythm relaxed and enjoyable. This is an extremely excellent novel. Under the background of a false doomsday, explore the truth and save the people you cherish; facing difficulties and choices, where should you go? The wind is blowing and the clouds are flying. How can the clouds achieve the purpose of saving everyone amidst the waves of light and darkness on the surface, but actually the battle between star beasts, titans and various humans? I hope this book will not collapse. As long as it is written according to the rhythm, it will definitely become a classic. I achieved a score of 0.01S in the [I Don't Want Jiang Xiaoduo] challenge, surpassing 99% of Blue Star people. Come and give it a try (I will never mention Jiang Xiaoduo after Jiang Xiaoduo leaves, and I will never leave Jiang Xiaoduo)

The subject matter is good and the sentences are fluent, but the setting of the content is really poor. Even after the game has started, the player lineup and the anti-player lineup are still mixed together, and there is no sense of separation at all. The attributes of the protagonist in the early stage are very low. It is a wild boss, and the attributes are not as high as the copy elites. Several entries look like fake. The protagonist is still an anti-player lineup, but I don't see how anti-player the protagonist is. In fact, it looks like a traditional game-themed novel, which only allows monsters to be resurrected several times.

There is a problem with game settings

Too weak, think of a perverted dog, no distinction between good and bad.

Do you like to do bad things, are naturally opposed to each other and help players level up? Originally, the fun part was how to kill the players. They were all well written before. How about Jiang Xiaoyun? Either don't leave room for the player to be too bad from the beginning, or write it to the extreme and never stop. What does it matter if you repeatedly jump in the middle? A clown?

The classification is seriously broken, the camp classification is seriously broken (there is a possibility of guest appearances), there are serious off-topic behaviors, logical thinking is not good, the protagonist has a certain direction bias towards players (especially female players), the game only has life and death (it depicts not only the game, but also the real world) Crisis awareness Like a child who can't walk, riding a bicycle, not the Virgin but leaning towards the Virgin, forcing the plot, it would be good individually, but the whole would be very poor, which means there is almost no potential to be changed into comics or animation (the beginning will be very attractive), but without these, it seems monotonous, after all, the game plus the real world The setting of the protagonist NPC is doomed to be monotonous without any emotion for the player, and the NPC in the world can pull very little. The NPC in the dungeon is irrational and unable to communicate. In the end, it is impossible for the player to level up without killing monsters. There is a period where the player Jiang Xiaoduo (sinister and cunning) and the NPC protagonist break into each other. The dungeon is the final blow (players cannot be killed except for the protagonist, so there is nothing scary. Players basically think it is just a game). The sense of dissonance and conflict is very strong, but nothing can be perfected by just writing. My conclusion is a bit hasty and needs to be improved, but it is not much different.