No Way: My Virtual Girlfriend Became a Sword Immortal?

In fact, this kind of subject matter is quite new. I don't know why so few people watch it. The plot is okay. If the author wants to improve it, he can start with the writing, add some laughs, and then keep writing. It ends in more than a hundred chapters. The plot is too thin. The characters can be enriched, so that it will be fulfilling.

I can't understand it clearly, the original writing was not very good. I am still updating the Shishui chapter every day... I won't follow it anymore. . What's more is not more water. . Excessive