The Carefree Immortal Doctor of the City

I'm almost halfway through it, and it's quite interesting. I'll give it a good review once I've finished watching it.

The ending is too hasty and sloppy

Selling weapons in rural Nagada? How brainless are you? Selling a handful can still be said to be an ancestral hand-me-down. You sell so much of it, and you are arrested by the police in three minutes without any background. And you are told that it will only be sold for a few hundred yuan? If you want to sell it, it should be a pill. If you talk about it too much, it will make you cry. This kind of article will lower your IQ. I should abandon it decisively.

It just seems weird that he bumps into the main characters from other books.

Many things ended without being explained clearly.

Don't always write about slaps in the face. Men, when you hit someone, use your fists. Only sinister people slap people with their hands.

To be honest, this ending was really too casual. That person didn't show up, the Immortal Palace had no beginning and no end, and Commander Yan didn't know that the headmaster was her mother or his father. Overall, it was getting worse and worse. I have read so many books and this is my first time to comment on it. The ending is really childish. There are a lot of things in the middle that can be ignored and written a lot, but the important ones are not mentioned. And I don't have a good impression of Xu Ruoxue either. She gets angry at every turn, is a jerk at every turn, and has a big temper.

Why did I finish it like this? I feel like it could be updated. I was caught off guard...

I think pig's feet are always showing off.

Too much talking