Transcendental

It's so long-winded. A competition can take several chapters. It's a lot of nonsense. Just to express the hero's coolness, it takes several pages to express it. It's enough to express it once, and it needs to be reflected continuously. It's really a lot of nonsense. I can't stand it anymore, so I will delete it decisively.

It starts at the beginning but ends at the end. For the 21st century, the author's skills are too shallow to describe the rich and colorful pictures and scenes of cultivation and fantasy. The story is okay, but the technique is too bland and childish! No sense of attraction at all!

The ending is too bad. If you don't have time, don't write it. It's so annoying.

Nice

Very nice