A Sect Playboy: Saintess, Help Me Cultivate

Well, I came here to watch it because Lao Bai recommended it. At first, I thought it was Lao Bai's trumpet, because it obviously borrowed a lot of aspects from it. But I'm pretty sure it's not the case now. The writing is still good, and the plot is well set up. However, the plot distribution and character creation need to be improved. I feel that there is no core to attract readers. It seems that I want to write everything well, but fail to write everything well. For example, in terms of character design, the protagonist starts out as a mortal (of course, he is actually a second-generation immortal), but he is inexplicably very confident. During the garbage refining period and the foundation period, he can make all the Nascent Soul gods bow their heads and obey orders, and the aura of wisdom is too obvious. The other female supporting characters are thin and unlikable, and almost all of them were offline before they even gained fans, and the transitions were abrupt. The battles are protracted, there are too many dialogues, and the supporting characters are more detailed than the male and female protagonists. The previous plot is light and interesting. From the second to the third hundred chapters, it is basically fighting, and it is mostly the supporting characters. I don't know how many people can watch it. I just want to skip it. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion, and I do not mean to educate the author by pointing fingers. I hope the author will write more wonderfully and the results of this book will get better and better.

Very good article. The writing is humorous and the content is good. The disadvantage is that after reading Chapter 200, I feel that the protagonists are not very well portrayed, and the foreshadowing is a bit too obvious for people to guess how it will be written in the future. The plot is also too compact (maybe it was just for the sake of rhythm at the beginning?) It is recommended to use some small things to flesh out the main characters.

The plot is good in the beginning, but it gets a bit boring after the 200th chapter. It is recommended to refer to Hehuan Zong😁😁😁

After the 200th chapter, the story is very slow. It takes ten chapters to find any material. There is no main line at all. The writing style is very average and there are no interesting articles. I don't know what type of writing the author wants to write. I don't recommend it.

This mindless harem novel is just a joke. It should be banned on the platform. It's boring.

I still want to see it, why is it not available?

Did someone polish the writing at the beginning? The speed of light later on was a mess ✓4

I can't say it's not good-looking, the general outline is still good, but there are too many things made out of nothing. There is also pure licking. It feels baffling. It is always written with a hammer on the left and a mallet on the right

The plot has no logic, it is just filled with colorful content, and one character's name has been changed inexplicably.

If you can't get it together, just force it together, and move the poems around. Isn't it embarrassing? Was it written by the person who recommended it? Can't relate to the storyline? I'm speechless just thinking about it