About Me Becoming Naruto's Brother

The character of the main character is a bit disgusting. As an adult, the result is that behaviors, habits, emotions, thoughts, insights, etc. Are not in line with the soul of an adult. If you don't want to write, then don't force it. If you just want to perfunctory readers, I suggest you write a video about urban women. It's better for male videos to be more normal.

How can you have the nerve to bring out something once it's taken off? The writing is mediocre to death. The plot is gone. The combat power is also not handled well. Kyuubi + Uzumaki Clan + Wood Release + Molten Release + Flying Thunder God + Thunder Armor = the expressive power of an elite jounin. Moreover, he also faced threats from Danzo and was seriously injured by Kisame Kisame and was sent to the hospital.

The writing is messy, did you correct the rating?

I have no idea what I'm writing about, the preface doesn't match the postscript, the logic is confusing, and the writing is really bad.

There are some typos. I hope the author can overcome them and write better in the future.

Can there be less drama with Tiantian?

Half of the writing is gone

Almost every article has a few typos, and you can't understand it without looking too far! I hope the author will work hard and write a better chapter

The protagonist looks so uncomfortable

Looks a little strange