I Only Wanted the Heroine to Escape the Scumbag, So How Did I Become a NTR Guy?

If the plot can be set up with characters, it should be bad, should be good, and it doesn't fall apart at all. The female imp is not as annoying as others, but I hope the author can continue writing and never stop.

Generally speaking, an old man said it right in the above review. It imitates Japanese light novels, and the actual writing is quite weird. It took more than ten chapters to solve a bad secret filming incident. It is really difficult to evaluate the forced intelligence. At least the male protagonist still has a suspect who is still being investigated. The guy surnamed Li is always talking bad about the male protagonist and does nothing. It is outrageous that the two women can endure it. The starting point is pretty good. Attractiveness, I was too lazy to read more than 80 chapters. From the beginning, I said I wanted to change my image. The reason I kept giving was that I was afraid that people close to me would see it. It was difficult. One day, I suddenly shaved my head and people thought I had been taken away from me. There was also the middle surnamed Li who went to the gang to deal with the male protagonist. The male protagonist thought that he was the one to deal with, but he was unwilling to speak clearly and had to forcefully create conflicts. He was invincible.

Chu Yuying was okay in the early stage, but the further she looked at it, the more disgusting she became. 1. Spread rumors in school that he is a childhood sweetheart. The protagonist is deaf and blind. The whole school knows about it. He is the only one who asks who is who. 2. Sneak into the protagonist's room in the middle of the night and take a photo with the protagonist while the protagonist is asleep, and use the photo to threaten the protagonist to compete for the position of student council president. The protagonist is innocent and deaf, and you can never see the goodwill shown by each female character. It is also funny that things are shown on the surface and talked about friendship or other things.

The wording is not very good, and the plot is very childish. The protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. The setting is too unlike a passerby. That is to say, the setting is an underground emperor, a martial arts master, a T0 rich second generation. I don't understand how the protagonist can become a passerby if he has not passed through it. The plot cannot be written in a high-level way. It feels like playing house.

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ ps: The following statement is a hundred million points long, I hope the author will reply I have read all the updated content so far. The main plot of this book is the story between the male protagonist Xia Che and several female protagonists. After reading the first few chapters, I couldn't help but read them all at once. The male protagonist is a yellow-haired gangster. "Let me complain first." He said several times that he wanted to trim his hair but still did not take any action. This is a drawback. The main mission of the male protagonist when his soul travels to this comic world is to prevent Li Junyang from falling in love with any of the female protagonists, so the general plot is that the male protagonist completes the main mission by changing the attitudes of the female protagonists such as Shen, Chu, and Jiang towards Li Junyang or by making friends with the female protagonist in advance. For now, except for the content about the heroine Jiang, there are no knives, and there are no particularly big poisonous points. Also, I feel that the author has dug a lot of pits, such as the four-color rose, the roommate Yue (brother), and the male protagonist's master Su Qingrou. I hope the author can fill in these pits, so as not to forget about them when the time comes. There is also the related content. When will the blue diamond stolen by Cao Ying (red rose, one of the four-color roses) be released? The protagonist lives in poverty, and it is a bit difficult to make a living. Emm Then, can you drive more (๑˙ー˙๑)? After all, the protagonist is already an adult, so there are so many female protagonists and you can't just watch? It can't be Shimizu Fumi. Of course, if you want to drive more secretly, don't get banned. There is also a very important pitfall: the male protagonist is from the Xia family, and the Xia family has gone abroad for some reason. The male protagonist has a younger sister who will appear on the scene for unknown reasons. As for why the Xia family suddenly cut off the protagonist's living expenses, why they left the Yanyun Gang abroad and sent the underground emperor Yanscar to protect the protagonist in "Ning Zhe Farewell", how should these authors explain it? It is always not good to keep hanging. It makes people feel itchy, just like the Riddler. The last thing I hope is that I can arrange a suitable ending for each character. "Especially Jiang, it's so miserable." Don't cut off the book without finishing it. Personally, I recommend reading the book. If you think there is anything wrong with what I said, please accept the refutation.

So far in the plot, I have never seen a place that requires a lot of wisdom and reflects the male protagonist's ability. But you have repeatedly downplayed your wits, making the male protagonist, who I think is quite smart, be so outwitted in front of women that he feels ashamed. One is what you call a straight man with a single-celled personality. Is this the reason why the male protagonist is described as very intellectual? Do you think it's sweet to be met by the heroine and to swallow her anger even when she's suppressed by the heroine? Do I need to create a new childhood sweetheart identity in order to enrich my personality among my classmates while I am dealing with Liqun? In order to make you, a bastard, feel like you're superior to me in front of your classmates? But I didn't expect that I would still be so dumb that I didn't know. I was so dumb that the heroine jumped in front of me and I was just making a noise verbally? As a landlord, no, I am a person who wears books, with a perspective that runs through the whole book. I have a lifetime of experience as an adult, and I was also told the truth by a short-haired "male tenant". By the way, I must sleep to death when there is someone in the room at night. I must meet a woman in the room whose hands and feet are completely restrained. I must be extremely intelligent in the room at night. I must completely believe everything the tenant says. When I talk to the tenant, I must not look at her face or her expression. I must be controlled. Originally, I was an animation villain through Douyin who did a good job of attracting people to read the novel. However, after reading more than 200 chapters, I regretted that I had read so many. I always hoped that the male protagonist would not be so smart and kept reading. In the end, the highlight moment was only given to the first female protagonist named Shen. The others after that were not interesting. The wheelchair girl was okay. I won't say more about who Lexi is. To put it simply, classic stories about humiliation of women and stories about girls charming men. Forget it, at least among the Seven Cats, they are very conscientious. You can continue to make more stories for your audience, but in the future there will be a group of people who have not seen good things but are as crazy as those in Zhanshen.

Write well, don't worry about appendix, and Su Geng

Can this article get a score of 9.5? Who are the top audiences? Even if your writing skills are not good, you still need to forcibly reduce your intelligence. If you don't reduce your intelligence, you won't be able to write? You can learn to understand the long mouth of female videos without even using it. It's a pure stroke.

It's poisonous. The original protagonist deceived a waiter by using a fake relationship to eat, and the male protagonist has always been ambiguous.

What follows is my opinion. The male protagonist has some subversive behavior. For example: 1. When the male protagonist knows that the original male protagonist is looking for someone to beat up others, he subconsciously thinks that he is not causing trouble for him even though he knows that he has offended him. I also thought it was other classmates in school. 2. When I was helping the school beauty catch the person who was taking candid photos, I obviously had three suspects in my mind, and I could tell from the interrogation tone and subconscious actions. You can clearly tell who it is. The result is still no clue. If it weren't for that girl, I really doubt how long it would take for the male lead to catch this person who was secretly filming? Later, I finally caught someone taking a candid photo, but the surrounding wall suddenly broke down. I would also wonder why this wall suddenly broke down. It happened that the original male protagonist was also in that position, and the male protagonist did not doubt him at all. In the end, he was asked to chase her. Is he not afraid of the original male lead having any evil thoughts at all, or is he totally out of his mind? Later on, I finally realized that the original male protagonist had some bad intentions, but in the end, he threw them out of his mind. Start straight away. I wrote more than ten chapters. 3. When the male protagonist was helping Jiang Yu, he obviously had various ways to take the opportunity to deliver things to her, but the male protagonist just chose to give it to her directly like a fool. For example, the male protagonist gives a new wheelchair to the female protagonist, and the male protagonist pretends that this is a lottery gift. This will only make the heroine feel more guilty. It is better to change the situation to a male protagonist and take her to the mall, let his subordinates pretend to be staff, and say that lucky customers can draw a prize and let the heroine get a wheelchair. 4. The male protagonist goes to pick up the female protagonist every day. Can't you realize that the heroine's grandma has not been seen for several days? Everyone should be suspicious. Later, the male protagonist found a way to treat the heroine's grandmother and legs from his master. The result was not told at all, it was said to be a surprise. Doesn't the male protagonist know that the heart disease will become more serious the longer it goes on? Also, when I knocked on the door in the morning, the heroine never opened the door or responded. Instead, the hero knocked harder and harder, and even climbed through the window. Didn't he have any doubts about why the heroine didn't open the door? The heroine opened the door, and the hero only felt that she was a little unhappy. Don't you feel a little strange? When the male protagonist took her to see the sea. Obviously, I noticed a strange feeling. I always put this thought aside subconsciously. When hearing the heroine's wish. The male protagonist also subconsciously thinks that the female protagonist wants to live a good life. This last wish looks like a last wish! Later, when the male protagonist put the medicinal ingredients to save the heroine's grandma into her home, couldn't he have noticed why her grandma hasn't been at home these days? And it was secretly put in (if the heroine's grandmother was still there, it would only make the heroine feel more guilty towards the hero.) The result in the book became the last straw for the heroine. The male protagonist kept talking about saving her, but he didn't notice any of the details around her. The male protagonist keeps saying that he wants to give him a surprise. It's not a surprise but a shock, right? 5. Later, when Yu Shiyue (the male protagonist's roommate, the male protagonist thought he was a boy at first, but later the male protagonist found him wearing a skirt for the first time, and lied that she was Yu Shiyue's sister) appeared in the male protagonist's room. She was seen standing next to him in her dress. In the end, they thought she was Yu Shiyue's sister, and the male protagonist's IQ was second to none, so obvious that it was hard to tell. This person is obviously Yu Shiyue. There are only three people in this house. Is it possible that one more person will suddenly appear? Wait, there are also various behaviors that reduce intelligence. 6. After the male protagonist heard that the little girl had a childhood sweetheart, he still suspected that there was some strange phenomenon in the book. Wouldn't he ask about it? The whole school knew, but he was the only one who didn't know. Isn't this strange? No one else has this kind of IQ. (From the beginning to the end, the author has always said that the male protagonist should shave his hair. But after more than 100 chapters, he still hasn't shaved his hair. The male protagonist has always had time to run around, so is it because he can't squeeze out any time to shave his hair? Later on, the male protagonist has been saving various female protagonists. , The male protagonist doesn't want to get involved with their feelings, because he personally feels that the female protagonist has a crush on the male protagonist, and the author obviously wants to write that the male protagonist is a straight man. From the feelings between the people around the male protagonist and towards the female protagonist, it can be clearly observed that the male protagonist is straight and stupid towards the female protagonist, but the male protagonist is towards the female protagonist. His girls don't look straight or stupid at all. The plot is a bit confusing. When the male protagonist knows that he has a crush on him, he doesn't directly say that he doesn't like her, but instead says something similar to Jiang Yu to her. I want to stay with her and take care of him all my life. This is starting to go against the previous concept. What is the difference between this and the original male protagonist? Except that he did not hurt them, but kept hanging on to them.) But the emotional drama written by the author is a bit deliberately sensational. It's like superfluous.