I Told You to Build a Family, Not Lead Seven Convict Women in a Rebellion!

This book has a good look and feel, so I won't go into details about its advantages, but only a few points. The first is the system - the description of rewards is too rigid. It is simply a tool to advance the battle plot. Generally speaking, if there is a system, there is no need to be at a lower level than the enemy. This is not a serious training article. It is fun to crush the game. You can let the system say "Don't deduct the favorability, otherwise you will die" or Being at a lower level than the opponent is just to create an atmosphere where there is a bomb under the table. It is unnecessary. I have read about 80 chapters so far, and the advancement is very slow - because of your narrative method, there is no fast forward and omission, the advancement is slow, the protagonist is not strong, and you have to read this book on the frontier. Developing power is too awkward. It should be noted that the title of the book is still related to the heroine, but you treat them as monster spawner experience babies. Although the book has a good look and feel, your way of thinking may make many readers give up before reading the interesting plot. I hope the author knows

This book should be called The Eunuch and His Women

For me, this book can only be regarded as a relatively average one. I feel that the rhythm of the plot is very slow and uncomfortable to read. Moreover, the system is so transparent that I might as well not use it. It is of little use. Really, it is completely like an ancient system. There is no innovation and it is boring. It slipped away🌚

Plot summary: The male protagonist appears with a beautiful female partner Little villain: It looks good, I think 🌿 Male protagonist: 💢, 🔪 Little villain: I am (XX clan/XX faction/XX person), you can't kill me, ugh☠️… The villain received a text message The villain has arrived Male protagonist in one outfit [Ding! The favorability of XX female supporting role has improved, congratulations to the host for obtaining the level/skill/equipment] Male Protagonist: Just in time, Dusha! Sha Wan changed the map and appeared somewhere with a beautiful female partner... The biggest problem with this book is that the combat power has collapsed, so much so that the entire rhythm is messed up. Judging from the title of the book and the previous foreshadowing, the whole plot should have started with the farmers revolting and seducing the empress. Later, the villains got bigger and bigger because they couldn't control it. The entire battle force was raised several levels without control, and then the plot completely collapsed. The whole experience is like cheating the game to the point of ruining the experience. Open it a little, leave some challenges, then you are still interested in playing. You have to open this chapter to clear the level as soon as you open it, and then when you enter the next level, you immediately take a shortcut to find the boss at the end of the level. If you don't open it, you can't defeat it. Once you open it, you have to rush through the next level. What kind of experience can you have like this? Finally, the author created a favorability system that doesn't even include the plus or minus signs.

After reading Chapter 30, I really can't stand it. A group of women are standing around like licking dogs, letting these women yell at each other. There are a lot of things that can be explained in one sentence, which makes me speechless.

This book should be called The Eunuch and the Affection Between Several Women

Too much nonsense. I wrote four or five chapters but the storyline didn't advance.

It doesn't look good. After killing the bandits, the village was burned directly without taking away the treasure. It seems like a newbie, so there is no need to watch it!

The preface you wrote does not match the postscript. It clearly reminds you that the initiation is about the dragon gripper, but you wrote it as the powerful vajra foot. Many are like this

Where did Cao Zun go? Didn't Chen Xuan pretend to be a tribesman after being taken into Chen Xuan's inner world, and then the Cao Zun kept coming out after he rescued the Cat Lord? Where did he go? Did the author forget about him?