Asked About the World of Mortals

The writing style is average, and what is more attractive is the protagonist's mental growth at different times in the book, which is about the discussion of the so-called cause and effect, Jianghu, and heroes. In an era when cool writing is rampant, this is a rare good book with a certain depth.

There are a lot of pitfalls, but looking at it, the author has filled in a lot of pitfalls. The plot is really confusing, and it is not the kind of white text that can be understood at a glance. Many people came there with swords. I don't think it has much to do with Jian Lai. I really can't stand the old lady's foot bindings compared to the general manager.

The writing is good, but the writing is off-kilter: To refine one's heart in the world of mortals is to taste the ups and downs of the world and watch the ever-changing world... Rather than to constantly be a Holy Mother! If you continue to do Holy Mother behavior, you will only become a true Holy Mother instead of refining your heart.

At first glance, it is a bit rough, but after reading it again, I realize the true meaning, especially Chapter 34, which makes me cry. Xing Xiangzi·Poetic and Painting A landscape with light wings. Frost covers the willows and the birds chirp silently. Begonia is drunk, and the boat is crossing wildly. Look at the early flowers withering, the late flowers are pale, and the flowers are red. Every word is a pearl, walking along a quiet path. Turn into a butterfly and fly, follow the wind into dreams. A pipa song will leave a name for thousands of years. Write about fake hatred, true love, and strong affection. Thank you for every encounter in life. Meeting is a destiny. Treat every hard-working author kindly. Although there are some small flaws and many homophonic words, I believe it is the porter's mistake, but I don't mind giving a good review.

It's ugly. I can't stand it after reading a few chapters. Can you write your own stuff? I'm really sick of always imitating others, and I'm still fooling around with swords and swords.

The author is unique in being able to write the protagonist in such a disgusting way. He drinks alcohol and smokes cigarettes. He takes a sip of wine and a cigarette without saying a few words. The main character is also very handsome. I've been thinking about it for a long time but I still can't figure out how this behavior is related to Shuai and Chivalry. Stop writing it. It's too disgusting.

The more I write, the more useless it becomes. The main character is the Holy Father. He wants to save the world, but he doesn't have the ability to do it. He just acts as a chess piece and strings together cause and effect. In short, the more I watch it, the less I like it.

This is similar to Jianlai. Although I don't understand it very well after seeing it, it's all over once I see it, haha.

Most of the people who say bad things are those who like to read mindless and entertaining articles. Perhaps nowadays few people can calm down and read truly good articles, and there is no need to compare it with foot wraps. Although there are many holes dug, there are also many holes filled. It cannot be compared with those pretentious articles that are more rhetorical than emotional.

A very good beginning. It's fascinating. The storyline is not cliched. It's good. Please try to update it.