The First Dude in Daqian

I'll just briefly talk about my feelings: the writing is not as bad as they say, and the plot is compact and coherent, without feeling disconnected. The protagonist is an upright person, has feelings for his family and country, and likes to have girls but is not greedy for sex. Although everyone except the protagonist has lost their wits... I think the flaws outweigh the flaws. If we compare this book with those pure and refreshing novels that have no bottom line and only know how to kill, kill, and collect, it will definitely not be satisfying enough. But it's good to change the taste once in a while if you've read too many of those refreshing articles. Anyway, I said something fair. Those who like it should really read it every day. Those who don't like it should leave it. Don't maliciously attack the author.

A standard cool article for men, talk about the shortcomings: 1. The writing style is average, the sense of substitution is not strong enough, and sometimes it can make you awkward. 2. The plot is cliché, all the characters are witty, and the supporting actors are all Gong Juren. 3. The protagonist is a strong criminal + a self-disciplined tauren + Alexandre Dumas. The whole text's attitude towards women is that we want all good women and don't waste bad women. This is just fun in novels. In reality, good women must be cherished and bad women should be kept away. Otherwise, if your wife finds out about your messing around, how do you refute her sentence "Bad men don't waste"? Just wait until you put on the hat.

Maybe I have read too many Shuangwen, and I feel depressed when I talk about my inner feelings. The protagonist, the empress, and all the corrupt officials have their own positions. They are obviously bad, and the Gu family is even worse, but they can't directly kill the Gu family. In the previous war, the Gu family and the Lian family treason and the land was cut off. How come What can I say? It's very realistic, very desperate, very depressing, and very few people express their sincerity. Compared with other cool articles, it's simply difficult to follow. The series of dark stories behind it are also very disappointing, such as the parents of the Qingzhu family who were beheaded by the Gu family, and the consequences of the Gu family's treason and the Lian family's treason. What about Liu Jiadao's protagonist's father, etc., Etc., Etc. In other aspects, Liu Shuyao is too intellectual, and there are some heroines in there, but it will be okay later on. However, I am not very educated. I am a math major and I don't know what to write. That's it. I hope I can include all the good-looking heroines in the end, such as Qingzhu and Begonia.

Let's talk about it: There's nothing bad about the plot, but the protagonist is a loser. The villain slept with his wife on his wedding day and rushed to his house to beat his woman. As the heir to the most powerful official, the villain didn't even get a slap in the face. Is junk writing so popular? After thinking about it for a while, I realized that the scenes in this book are too small, there are too few characters, there is no substitute for the villain, and there is no constant stream of characters to join. If the villain is hit hard, the development of the plot will be accelerated. Once the villain dies, the book will be over. To sum up: the author's structure results in the protagonist having to become a waste.

Generally speaking, it's good. Generally speaking, the home of the protagonist in this genre is the villain's nest, but I didn't expect that this place is really high-spirited and upright.

In fact, the writing is quite good, unlike some novels where you lose interest after reading a few chapters.

How did the author come up with the idea of ​​asking the protagonist to design his real wife to seduce the protagonist's enemy? Can this get 9.2 Points?

Come on, author, this book is really not as bad as those people say. I can only say that people are too impatient nowadays, and they will use it to criticize the slightest bit of dissatisfaction. As long as it is not a purely refreshing article, it is a sin. What's more, this book is also considered a pure refreshing article. I don't know where to criticize it. For so many books I have read, the writing is very good. Come on!

What a joke, it's not okay for the original protagonist to do this, it's very bad, but it's very reasonable for me to do this. There is not a single smart person in the book, they are all just one-sided, not to mention the so-called distinctive characters, let alone the sense of immersion. The whole text looks like two orangutans fighting each other, one hugging its head and scurrying away, and the other always standing at the highest point of morality. It is very crude, and the writing style is also the same.

The writing is okay at the beginning, but what the hell is written in the back. I write this Phoenix Robe every day and I am speechless. The sentences are also really bad. I have no interest in reading at all. I have no idea what is written in the back. It is quite unbelievable to write such a good book. If you don't know how to write, just finish it quickly.