Apocalypse: A Trillion Supplies Stockpiled from the Start

Halfway through the writing, I changed the storyline. Manman and Wen Ling were not written. As for the follow-up to the hotel, I agreed to go back to the hotel to find Manman and Wen Ling in a month. Why did I change the plot? I just wrote the ending.

The writing is really boring. If you want to kill, you can kill or leave. You don't want information or people. It's pointless to do a lot of chores. It's really boring to read. I think you are losing money because of the low number of words. You may get two more chapters, but you ruined a good book and at least 100 people walked away. I don't know whether you made a profit or a loss? The writing has no sense of rhythm at all, it's really boring. You can explain 2 chapters by punching, 3 chapters by firing a gun, and it has been ten chapters to kill a group of people and you haven't finished the middle process. When you really think about it and continue writing, I have forgotten what happened earlier. Is this a low word count and slowing down the pace? It's too boring. Can it still look good if it's out of touch?

Just average, it's a lone wolf for self-interest. I've read less than half of it and I can't stand it anymore. I can't write many words in this book. According to the protagonist's behavior, he will definitely be the only one left on earth in the end.

I don't know what the author thinks. Some of the protagonist's actions simply don't conform to the logic of the apocalypse. It's only 8:04. How did you get it? Grinding and chirping, it's just hydrology

The sentences are fluent

The description and portrayal of the protagonist are inconsistent and full of loopholes. The names of the ex-girlfriend and the girl at the front desk can be confused. Typos account for nearly half of the book. The plot adaptation deviates from the main line. Zhao Manman, Wen Ling, and Bai Wei are just thrown away? One thing was written in a whirlwind manner and filled with nonsense, but it was still unfinished. It felt like two novels were pieced together. Not to mention that the country's first-class demining hero was maliciously and secretly written as the leader of an evil force, harming the reputation of others, harboring evil intentions, and having ulterior motives. It was impossible not to report it.

Don't read Toxic, two novels combined. Things change after chapter 126.

It's all nonsense from beginning to end

Anyone with a title like Hundred Billions Trillions is basically crappy writing.