A Sickly Beauty Controls an Interstellar Beast

I have read Chapter 160. I personally like novels with cute pets. The story is very interesting and I also like the setting. Although I occasionally feel that the writing is a bit childish, I really like this story, so it should have been rated as "good-looking", but some of the words and descriptive sentences in it are really confusing. For example, when describing the heroine's dodge when being attacked by a sneak attack, "the slender waist twists..."; And other words such as "the white teeth bite the lip hard...", After fighting and vomiting blood, "the pale little face is breathtakingly beautiful..." And other artificial words to describe the heroine in the battle. It is really both dramatic and very artificial... Maybe it's because I've watched too many male videos, and I subconsciously resisted this kind of masculine description. When describing the beauty of the heroine's second sister, she also used "white teeth...". How obsessed is the author with this description? . . Now my mind is full of the words "white teeth", and it feels like a brainwashing song spinning and jumping in my mind non-stop. . . Anyway, so far I have seen sticky and ambiguous adjectives directed at women such as "slender waist", "white teeth" and "lips". It is not clear whether words such as "jade feet", "jade hands", "pink fists", "jade arms", "delicate" and "unbearable" will appear later...

This book follows the exact same formula as the popular female videos more than ten years ago, and even the plot is not as good as it was more than ten years ago. Let me first talk about a few things that I think are not good-looking. 1. Inconsistency. In the early stage, the heroine was created as an invincible image with a big golden finger. Later, the enemies became more powerful one by one, like bamboo shoots after a rain. 2. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is a bit inexplicable. It looks like love but also just lust. If you are not sure, wait and see. 3. Stop writing dramas where the female protagonist is strong and talented, and the male protagonist is stronger than her. If the story is enjoyable, it will always be enjoyable, and the female protagonist will be invincible in the world. 4. If you like to read face-slapping articles, just read the first half.

First of all, this setting is quite good, but the heroine's soul is somewhat incomplete, and a whole book is spent focusing on how the heroine repairs her soul. Secondly, I'm actually not too interested in some of the descriptions of the heroine. Here's an example: when the heroine is fighting, she will dodge, and the author will usually use qualifying sentences such as "twisting her slender waist" to describe it; when her life is on the line and the heroine wants to fight back with all her strength, she will first write "the white teeth bite the bright red lips fiercely" "The pale little face is breathtakingly beautiful" "The white wrist holds the dagger tightly" and a series of other things that I cannot accept for the time being. Because his setting is that of a strong female character, if the heroine is weak due to physical reasons at the beginning, I can understand the writing, but I don't understand that the hundreds of pictures in the whole book are about the heroine using her weak body to make up for the flaws in her soul. Reading this book, you can actually feel that the author wants to describe a heroine with a sense of contrast, but I don't recommend making the heroine's relationship network so large, as it will be confusing invisibly. I saw that now she has eight uncles and several brothers and sisters. She writes good bad guys and bad good guys. Filling in the pitfalls of the original heroine, it tells the story of several male characters who thought he was a good person at first, but later turned out to be different from what he seemed. The heroine accepts a pet when she encounters one. It's enough to write so many comments. Just go and see what you want to see [smile. Jpg]

I've read Chapter 144 and I really can't stand it anymore. On their way to the college entrance examination, they encountered some kind of beast that required soldiers to fight. Soldiers need to pass the college entrance examination. Everyone was saying that the Qian family was raising gu to kill each other. The heroine's family had no problem with them killing each other, but they also killed each other if they had no hatred, just to rank up. Name, I can't stand it. The college entrance examination is also a way to raise ghosts. They didn't go to the battlefield and died at the hands of their own people. If it was a virtual scene, it would be acceptable. However, most of the national reserve army died at the hands of their own people. It was the college entrance examination arranged by the state instead of on the battlefield. It's very shameful.

Not pretty. It's just too long-winded. The author can't always grasp the main plot. He wants everything and spreads it out too much. Every bit of plot has to be too wide-ranging. People who read it are very impatient. Then I skipped to read it, and it was still very verbose. I really couldn't stand it. I don't understand why it was all good reviews.

It's very interesting. The plot is smooth. I like the characters of both the heroine and the hero. But the extras are a bit lacking. Why doesn't anyone comment?

Now that I see about 160, I really can't stand it anymore. I personally like beast-controlling articles, but the focus of this article is not on beast-controlling at all, but on men, men, men. The value of every woman is a man. How good a girl is depends on whether the man is worthy of her. The point of competition between the female protagonist and the female protagonist is the man. Why put it on a women's channel? It looks like it loves women but it actually loves men. .

I was shocked when I saw more than 170 chapters. It is said to be about beast control, but in fact there is not much about beast control. The battles are basically the heroine's personal highlights. Many words describing women are very masculine, and female competition is very, very, very serious! The female supporting characters in it see the heroine's "shockingly beautiful little face" and they are jealous, resentful and malicious! If you see a man you like looking at the heroine for a few seconds, you will kill him or find trouble. The character descriptions of many female characters are domineering, vicious and charming young ladies, green tea bitches, fish pond kings, who love to stir up dissension but are not as strong as the heroine and end up getting slapped in the face. The female supporting character in it also writes that she likes to compete for men. Her mind seems to revolve around men, and marrying him is her first goal in life. To say that the female protagonist is strong only means that the female protagonist is strong, and what is more difficult is that even if the female protagonist is strong, the female protagonist is set to be stronger than the male protagonist.

Why do I always feel that it is a novel about cultivating immortals? It uses spiritual power and cold weapons in battle. It is said that it is a strange beast and I don't see the difference. So I think the author changed it to a novel about cultivating immortals. The sense of dissonance will be much better.

To sum up the plot I have watched so far, there is serious female competition, strong women and strong men, the emotional line is very rough and cannot be read with the brain in mind, the description of women is a bit masculine, and there are plots that objectify women. In fact, the plot would be more exciting without a male protagonist. I don't know why I have to arrange one. The male protagonist always rushes to save the beauty with the princess holding the hero at the last moment. It is not a complete novel with a strong heroine. The writing is a bit watery but the general plot jumps too fast. The heroine's halo is still obvious. I really want to give a bad review, but I personally like beast-controlling stories, so I will give it an average rating.