After the Eldest Sister Gave Up, Her Ungrateful Siblings Were Stunned

1. The relationships between the characters are a bit confusing. For example, in the text, there is a passage that says, "Eldest brother, second brother, and third brother, please accept my humble opinion." Where does the male protagonist rank? 2. There are so many typos, I don't even want to talk about them. Shouldn't you have proofread it again before posting? 3. It's difficult to judge how the plot manages to be excellent in some parts but also feels dragged out overall. 4. Writing style, well, I won't go into details, it's a common problem with most online novels these days.

It's hard to rate, I'd say it's just okay. In the novels I read before, wealthy people had dowry lists in triplicate, one for the bride's family, one for the groom's family, and one for the official family. Plus, I felt the authors portrayed everyone as incredibly stupid and foolish; I couldn't get into them.

Although she hasn't entered the military camp yet, the female lead is really cool, and her friends are gradually gathering around her. The male lead is quite good, but he needs to be more outstanding to be worthy of the female lead. Several supporting characters also have distinct personalities. I currently really like Sister Liu and the sharp-tongued prince. I'm looking forward to more updates soon.

What kind of rubbish is this? The female lead is so pathetic, it's disgusting.

It's currently good, but the updates are too slow. Also, I always feel that the protagonist is always perfect in every way—good mentor, good brains, good luck. Have you ever written a story with an antagonist?

It's meaningless. She was reborn into loneliness. She was bullied so much in her past life, and she still can't bring herself to be ruthless in this life. She's just been suffering all this time. It's one thing to be incompetent, but even if she were, she would still be scolded and left money for her enemies. She deserved to be bullied like that in her past life.

There are so many, so many typos! The female protagonist was reborn into loneliness. Dawdling and procrastinating He's always getting bullied!

The book is riddled with typos; I barely got the names right more than a few times. Speechless.

The text itself is alright, but the names are mixed up and there are too many typos. Perhaps the author intentionally wrote it this way to attract attention.

This typo is ridiculous. The female lead has a special halo; she can do everything and excels at everything.