The Corpse Bride, the Ghost Emerges from the Coffin

It's such a mess. Take a look at what you wrote. The title you wrote is "Female Corpse" and you keep writing about how they suffered and other things. What we want to see is to write around the protagonist and the female corpse. Don't just write a bunch of messy things to fool us.

Chapter 500 of the main quest is still at 0, and a bunch of inexplicable independent side quests came out, and they were just added by force.

Why hasn't my wife been saved yet? Chapter 700

Not to mention anything else, around chapter 485, everyone clearly knew that Liu Qiuyue (Xu Hanxing) had a problem, and he left his teammates with him, and was eventually held hostage. Really 666, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up the book.

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The tiger's head has no tail. What kind of evaluation do you want? Can't be good

If you haven't read Shit, you can read this novel.

The main reason is that there is a lot of nonsense. We are obviously discussing how to save people, and we talked about stories while writing, and we talked about it for more than one article.

No plot at all

The article is wrong and full of typos