Da Wei: I Asked You to Be the Father-In-Law, but I Didn't Ask You to Be the Husband of the Empress.

It's well written, and this book made me feel a little refreshed. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. The framework is clear and the rhythm is appropriate. It is like a scroll unfolding and telling a story. Overall, it is much better than most of the cool articles on Qimao. Some novels have nothing but thousands of reviews, but this one has so few reviews. It may also be because of the eunuch, but whether it is the eunuch because no one is watching, or whether it is the eunuch and no one is watching, I don't know, which is a pity.

The layout is good, the contradictions between the characters and the plot gradually unfold, and it is complicated but not unfilled. It uses montage techniques such as flashbacks and narrations reasonably, and it has quality. It's not like some books that dig hundreds of chapters into illogical holes just to hook readers. The only thing is that the system of the Empress is a bit weak, and the language and literary knowledge are still a bit immature.

I have read more than a dozen chapters, but they are full of bells and whistles, and I can't understand what I want to write. Let's talk about cool writing, but it doesn't feel fun at all. Let's talk about tactics, but it's just scratching the surface. There are more than a dozen chapters and tens of thousands of words, but I can't tell who the protagonist is. He is like the moon in the water or a painting on the wall. He has no sense of existence.