I Emptied the Inner Treasury and Was Exiled to Lingnan. Now the Empress Begs Me to Carry On the Family Line

Read the second book of Shark Boss, a familiar recipe and a more skillful way to control the heat! Seven sisters-in-law, an empress, and an oiran, just ask who else is there, hehe!

This book tells the story of a great general and his seven sons who were executed on the order of the fatuous empress because of their fame and military power. The eighth son (the protagonist) survived because of his ordinaryness. With the help of the system, the protagonist strengthened himself and his seven sisters-in-law on the road to exile in Lingnan to revive the Yun family. Beautiful, highly recommended!

From Ma Su's book! Shark's writing is getting better and better! Although it is still the same old routine at the beginning, it becomes fascinating and refreshing later on. The control of the plot and the description of the characters are getting more and more refined! Come on, I hope the story will be more exciting

Thanks a lot?

Speed ​​up the update otherwise it will be boring.

Coward - He has traveled through time and still cares about that, trash!

The writing is smooth, the plot is exciting and full of ups and downs!

It's just that the plot is a bit too drawn out and a bit watery.

I feel that the author still needs to strengthen the overall concept, the thinking is not clear enough, and the development of the plot will be slow and unsmooth. Various details are not handled well, and the psychology of the characters is even more hasty (if the writing is not strong enough, there is no need to deal with so many characters). Moreover, the whole environment and background are messy. It feels like the preface does not match the follow-up. If you have read thousands of volumes and write with dexterity, you can learn from the techniques of the big names and outline it before writing. It will be much better.

How should I put it? Binding an awesome system is a cautious and timid thing to do. It's still on the way to distribution. Do you only have women in your heart? None of the escorting officers dared to resist the control. You got so much money for nothing and learned martial arts for nothing.